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Old 02-14-09, 08:28 AM   #1
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Heavy Weight Title Match: Adam (4-0) .vs Caustic (2-0)

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Sunday Night: Battles are set up
Wednesday: Adam 1 bar
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Old 02-15-09, 09:17 PM   #2
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Old 02-18-09, 11:36 PM   #3
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Being gay is genetic, so it's my cue to say it's a choice with this fool,
Caustic meets with balls and I ain't talking 'bout gene pool.
 
Old 02-19-09, 09:33 PM   #4
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Don't talk slick fool, your mouth'll get your bitch ass beat down
its not unusual to see you acting like a diva...n me like Chris brown
that's a piss poor effort, your rhymes ain't shit, I couldn't find in an alley
So if that's the best he can do, y'all might as well just Adam to my Tally
 
Old 02-20-09, 02:45 PM   #5
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When it comes to chicks, I'm strictly XXX, you just claim to beat them at will,
Bitch, you'll be my third win in a row ^, Caustic tac toe never took any skill.
 
Old 02-20-09, 03:05 PM   #6
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Being gay is genetic, so it's my cue to say it's a choice with this fool,
Caustic meets with balls and I ain't talking 'bout gene pool.
:0 ok

Don't talk slick fool, your mouth'll get your bitch ass beat down
its not unusual to see you acting like a diva...n me like Chris brown
heh but no
that's a piss poor effort, your rhymes ain't shit, I couldn't find in an alley
So if that's the best he can do, y'all might as well just Adam to my Tally
ok

When it comes to chicks, I'm strictly XXX, you just claim to beat them at will,
Bitch, you'll be my third win in a row ^, Caustic tac toe never took any skill.
D: It did when I was really young! creative.

v/ very close match. When I was a lad I noticed it said "X-X-X" on a tic-tac-toe board and when I was a lad I was looking at porn. So I have an attachment to the creativeness of Adam's punch, whereas looking back, Adam came more consistent in this battle and I have to definitely give it to A for consistency.

Apologies goes to Caustic for using intelligence to say something stupid.
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Old 02-20-09, 03:42 PM   #7
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Alright battle, Adam's first punch was okay, but his second one was very creative and my favorite punch in the whole battle.

Caustic, I didn't like your first punch at all, the second one was okay, but adam's last bar took this from you.

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Old 02-20-09, 08:23 PM   #8
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Being gay is genetic, so it's my cue to say it's a choice with this fool,
Caustic meets with balls and I ain't talking 'bout gene pool.
^wasnt feeling
When it comes to chicks, I'm strictly XXX, you just claim to beat them at will,
Bitch, you'll be my third win in a row ^, Caustic tac toe never took any skill.
^lol pretty nice flip

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Don't talk slick fool, your mouth'll get your bitch ass beat down
its not unusual to see you acting like a diva...n me like Chris brown
^no, too many CB punches as of late
that's a piss poor effort, your rhymes ain't shit, I couldn't find in an alley
So if that's the best he can do, y'all might as well just Adam to my Tally
^not bad wp

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Old 02-21-09, 08:50 PM   #9
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Being gay is genetic, so it's my cue to say it's a choice with this fool,
Caustic meets with balls and I ain't talking 'bout gene pool.

This was pretty descent here for an opener punch. Descent wordplay, but nothin special here.

When it comes to chicks, I'm strictly XXX, you just claim to beat them at will,
Bitch, you'll be my third win in a row ^, Caustic tac toe never took any skill.

This punch was ill. The 2nd line complemented the 1st line very well and was the best bar I seen this week in the 1-2-1 Punch forum. Great nameplay flip into wordplay. Setup was great and a good level of complexity.


Don't talk slick fool, your mouth'll get your bitch ass beat down
its not unusual to see you acting like a diva...n me like Chris brown


This was done better than the Chris Brown punch used against me last week on RB. Good concept development on this one.




that's a piss poor effort, your rhymes ain't shit, I couldn't find in an alley
So if that's the best he can do, y'all might as well just Adam to my Tally


not creative enough here. Remember, Adam has been battlin for a while under that name, so more versitality is required to make a direct connection off nameplay.


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Old 02-21-09, 09:03 PM   #10
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Being gay is genetic, so it's my cue to say it's a choice with this fool,
Caustic meets with balls and I ain't talking 'bout gene pool.
I don't know its ok but its kinda one sided wordplay what is gene pool other then genetics related, is it a type of billards? if you use the whole word for the punch the whole word should incorporate into the wordplay, if I read it both ways it should make sense.


Don't talk slick fool, your mouth'll get your bitch ass beat down
its not unusual to see you acting like a diva...n me like Chris brown
for happening not long ago at all these are allready played out
that's a piss poor effort, your rhymes ain't shit, I couldn't find in an alley
So if that's the best he can do, y'all might as well just Adam to my Tally
kinda of useless nameplay had no effect or punch, concept was generic


When it comes to chicks, I'm strictly XXX, you just claim to beat them at will,
Bitch, you'll be my third win in a row ^, Caustic tac toe never took any skill.
kinda useless nameplay again with no effect, set up was irrelevent to the punch except for the 'xxx', could have been worded a lot better, but I still think it would have been weak anyway.

Not that dope really, bad use of word and name play by both of you, It gets dope and creative when you can make his name have two meanings to fit in with the set up and punch, not just find a word or phrase it will fit in and write a sentence with it, it just turns out baisc and non effective

Have to say adam
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Old 02-21-09, 11:01 PM   #11
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Being gay is genetic, so it's my cue to say it's a choice with this fool,
Caustic meets with balls and I ain't talking 'bout gene pool.
eh, wasnt feelin it too much, decent concept tho.

Don't talk slick fool, your mouth'll get your bitch ass beat down
its not unusual to see you acting like a diva...n me like Chris brown
LOL, NO... this is on every board ever by now.

that's a piss poor effort, your rhymes ain't shit, I couldn't find in an alley
So if that's the best he can do, y'all might as well just Adam to my Tally
decent not bad, i guess it was good nameplay/wordplay... you did your thing with this one

When it comes to chicks, I'm strictly XXX, you just claim to beat them at will,
Bitch, you'll be my third win in a row ^, Caustic tac toe never took any skill.
deffintely the best line in the battle, you could have took it with this line alone... dope concept, dope connection... even included nameplay and wordplay... what more could you ask for? Very nice line homeboy.

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Old 02-21-09, 11:18 PM   #12
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So this is what it's like when you're up 6-0.
 
Old 02-23-09, 12:10 PM   #13
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v/ - snocap

for having the gayest name i've ever seen.
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Old 02-23-09, 12:27 PM   #14
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nothing hit hard but that tic tack toe line was the most creative.
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for having the gayest name i've ever seen.


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