aight heres the rules...
no d/r
no biting
5-10 line
spit in 15 min after check in
and check in once u see this

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check time starts

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Murderin This Rap-Wanna-Be-Faggot, Typin Ya Verse In fUcKEd Up fOnt Is The Only Time Ya Creatin Lyrical-Havok/ 1
I’ll Break Ya Arm Off N Stick It In Ya Eye So You Can See ‘How I Write’/ Havin Ya Period Is The Only Time This Virgin Pussy’s Flow Tight/ 3

I’ll Knock Ya Down To The Sand So Ya Can ‘LICK-SHELLS-BITCH’, This KID-REPELS-CLIT/ 4
Ya CELLS-SPLIT I Eat Hell Just To SPIT-HELL-ISH, I’m Battlin This BITCH To EMBELLISH-MY-RECORDS/ 5
I’m Jumpin This Kid Like A King On CHECKER-BOARDS/ WRECK-YA-WHORE While My METAPHORS-TORE-YA-CORE/ 6

HAVOC’S-WACK, How You Goin To ‘Serve’ Me When Ya Can’t Even Make EASY-MAC/ 7
Ya Must Be Handin Out FREEBIES-JACK, Every Time Ya See ‘Pussy’ This Boy Becomes A QUEEZY-‘CAT’/ 8

15 min exactly

Like skyscrapers, their ain't no toppin' me, like the lottery you gotta Fall Lucky//
I'll make your fleet retreat cause your Complete Arsenal couldn't defeat A Small Country//

Ya style cant be savored, you couldnt have flavor if i appointed your glands//
Your verses are like invisible periods because theres no point man//

Wording on you is wasted, because every bar you key is just the basics//
your hated and tighter on dicks than a jail full of high positioned probation anklets//

I serve herbs with quickness, but battling fags like this is random//
when he spits a show, the crowd sits down because no-one can stand-him//

if u were beyond logic then you shoulda known what i touch turns to gold//
i got blister flows, his magazine is just a cover up cuz i tore him through center-fold//

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haha my bad 2 min over......well anyways lets get some votes on this

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uppin 4 votes

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beyond you tookthis battle b/c of punches and multiples. your strucure was good.havok you did your thing but this over powered you with the punches. keep writtin though. return the fava:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123395

vote=Beyond

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

look people lets get some vets in here to vote, these noobs dont know what to look for and im not questioning ur talent BL just the voting

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Nice Battle ....
But I Thought Havoc Edged It Out ......

Lh-
Flow-8
Structure- 7....a Lil Stretched...
Punches...8
Personals-7

Bl-
Flow-7
Structure- Giraffe.......6 Lol..
Punches-7
Personals-7

Do The Math.....
Vote-lh

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uppin

uppin 4 votes cmon now

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yo my vote goes to beyond, he had way better punches and multis, plus i think he was better overall
vote goes to beyond

return the favor at http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124072
we need votes

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