I wrote this in school. It's more or less a rap song, done Chuck D style really.

Illusions

The Illusion of Darkness is not an illusion
For once it gets dark
It gets dark
The Illusion of Darkness is not an illusion
For once it gets dark
It gets dark

Since you can't see without light
Darkness is only what you can't make it out to be
Making out in the dark for the possibility
That you might by chance kiss an angel
The true pain goes right out flying through windows
Nobody will ever judge you by what you know
But rather what you don't
And if you won't, ever learn
Then you'll burn in the fiery pits of ignorance
For the chance, that you'll ever kiss an angel
The true pain goes, the true pain goes
The true pain shows through, it's obvious
But tell me this, will you ever sell me this?
Making profit from misery kinda just seems to me
Doesn't really matter because my pain has gone numb
But thats just me, the darkness differs in everyone

The Illusion of Darkness is not an illusion
For once it gets dark
It gets dark
The Illusion of Darkness is not an illusion
For once it gets dark
It gets dark

I know everything has been said before
But I'm climbing out a window not opening a door
Doing it differently in a different way
Because I know there is nothing new to say
But who's to say that's what I'm trying to do
I'm trying to reach you, trying to teach you
That you don't have to let the darkness beat you
If I could change the life of one, my job'd be done
But is that what I want? Should I do a one-eighty
Turn my back, be evil, and say that the devil made me?
And I don't care 'bout you, its not like you knew me
Threw me for a loop, letting darkness consume me
Why the fuck am I living? A fuck I should be giving
But I don't, there are no angels left to kiss
They got pissed living in eternal bliss
Then I realized it's best if I don't exist.

Fucking nihilist. Oh yeah. That's right, I found a way to say nihilist and not look stupid.
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OR DID I?!?!?!

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

WoW what a freekin concept behind this !!!
ya gott me jaw dropped Necro, like DAmn
the 1st verse hitt me hard, ill quote the lines man:
That you might by chance kiss an angel
The true pain goes right out flying through windows
Nobody will ever judge you by what you know
But rather what you don't
And if you won't, ever learn
Then you'll burn in the fiery pits of ignorance
For the chance, that you'll ever kiss an angel
The true pain goes, the true pain goes
The true pain shows through, it's obvious

^lovin that RaW THougHT man
stay up wit this if you evolved in ya craft ya would be unstoppable
peAce and deffintly stAy up wit this !!

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evilbombsquad, thanks. Means a lot.

Upping this scheiße.

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

that was illness blud, your flow was good i like the way u made it a song, very original piece, deep concept. true stuff aswell

check my battle and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195

I give you props for this piece, I really felt the concept and the style, everything you put into this piece complimented your talent to the utmost. As soon as I read the first line...."The Illusion of Darkness is not an illusion
For once it gets dark
It gets dark" ... I knew this piece was going to be worth the read. Theres not much more to be said than what has already. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.

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Damn, Necro, this has got to be one of my favorite pieces from you...ever...The content was so extremely riveting, almost like a figment of your imagination or a hallucination as I imagined it in my head...Really unlike anything I've ever read before, I loved it...The first four lines of the first verse were my favorite, so provoking in a mystical kind of way...I dont know, but what I do know is that noone could produce a piece like this except you, because everything about it, its darkenss, its unprecedented creativity and even its eerie aura of magic, is what YOU are..so who better for the job?.....("Eerie Aura.."..Try saying that 5 times fast)
Great writing Necro..
Stay up..we luv you.

Wow...I loved this...Damn...I love the structure you used. They way you made it into a song..very ill...I was feelin' it all the way through...Your flow was right there...Keep it up Beau...

peAce