Uben. Sonned's VERSE

i guess being as kareless at you are u dont mind if you lose/
I've seen the trouble you cause it aint ive noone the blues//
i think i kno who u are and shit gonna git started/
fuckin immagrint its about time you git deprated//
your ryhmes are wack u cant see the "picture" like you had broken glasses/
looks like sum one takin lessons cause you been to da token classes//
**cough cough** is that you coughin hmm i hear u weezin/
is it a sickness or is it from me givin you that lyrical beatin//
cause i threw a few punches and diddnt even try/
you wanted to battle and when i replied i jus sighed//


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KareLess's VERSE

Sais U'r Poetic thats Pathetic..U'r lines need medicsand i aint clowning cuz your verse juss said-it
you suck Dicks lets jut forget-it..like sports? and playing with Balls, fuck i cant get off U'r Fetish
your Sig looks like Street Fighter's Ry-u...Foots on fire which makes it easier to Lite-You!!
My flows complex like Dr.seuss and your confused..read my Books then try to Bite Whoo's..
Ispit after you so my verse caught you from Behind and now this kid is Walking Funny
By now Dummy must be Pist and Biting Hard like Stale bread cuz U'r Droppin Crummy..
youv'e been Sonned - Uben. sonned..Now i'ma light my Victory as if the Cuban's Won
plus u'r prolly fatter then the American Idle and Big P son, so im'a juss call you Rubin-Pun
ok peace. One, wait i fucked your girlz Buns and your a fagget ass There, Now i'm Dun.

merked.

uppin for votes.

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Hmmm...Uben Came Weak...Concepts Were Poor And No Real Hard Hittin Punches..

Kareless Came Nice...Nice Punches In There But Had Some Long Lines...Try And Shorten Them A Bit..

But Its Was 1-Sided...Kareless Took It Hands Down In All Aspects..

Vote - Kareless

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wow.
what the fuck!!


13 VIEWS but 1 fuckin VOTE.....




UpPiN FoR vOtEs....




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I'm Out of Jail. and Using this One UserName From Now On.
Fuck what you Heard. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
I'm KiLLa_Cali....By the Way Pleez Dont Ban Me..i Promise to Use Only this Name.

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UPPING FOR FUCKING VOTES. POLL VOTES DAMNIT...!!!!!!!!
I'LL RETURN THE FAVOR LIKE I ALWAYS DO AND VOTE ON YOUR BATTLE TOO.
DROP THE LINK....

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dis was a nice battle...
Uben. Sonned...punches were very basic dawg.......structure was there....flow was basic.......wordplay was nice.....personals ok but need work......overall....5.5/10...work on it..
-KareLess-...punches hit hard but some played.....flow was constistant....structure was ok......wordplay nice.....personals need work tho...overall...8/10
v/-KareLess-

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