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11-27-04, 03:34 PM | #1 | |
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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for$aken vs Empire
IP: 5671 DBDD
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11-27-04, 03:36 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 03:36 PM.
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11-27-04, 04:03 PM | #3 | |
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IP: EDD6 76E4
For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 04:03 PM.
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11-27-04, 04:31 PM | #4 | |
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Smells of old paint
spilled alchol and stale cigareetes I can see the stained carpet tattered and ripping in many places Like the old sheets that cover the windows in darkness The phone book under a table leg and another under the couches corner The recliner that doesnt open anymore and the old lamp that doesnt shut off till you unplug it The hunger of no food and even more i can remember what hunger is To search the refridgorator and find only cold air and a open box of baking soda To search the cabinets and find only a few cans left over which you are too young to cook maybe even too young to reach the stove I can see the other children on christmas showing off thier wonderfull toys Thier sleds and video games and other things from thier giftlists Thier action figures and all thier goodies in thier stockings I remember how sad i was I wrote Santa such a nice letter and this year i even sent him a map i drew all myself maybe i shouldve drew better? Because for some strange reason no matter how good i was Santa always forgot about me every year I remember mom cooking but i dont remmeber food never being near Mom was cooking something bad something that destroyed her the thing that destroyed us I remember the cold how the blankets were never warm enough How i woke many nights cryed and no comfort came no one checked to see if i was ok they wouldnt care if i died Only sleep came to help me overcome all the hardships i faced i see the death all around me my life as a savage and i realize most my memorys are nightmares that actually happened |
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11-27-04, 05:16 PM | #5 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: EDD6 76E4
Introduction They call me Lucas, Loner, individual, marked with social impunity never bowing down to the cheerleader and the jock community outside of the high school cliques never in a crew, just standing fierce but I hung out with my two best friends namely Alicia and Pierce they taught me everything but neverwhat to do with jock incidents Gym class when it happened....football season. quarterback was like president *22 33 HUT HUT* he backed up and now he just threw the football "DAMN!" I screamed...oddly it was heading for me....,,,,I saw So I kept my balance, extended my arms, and closed my eyes *TOUCHDOWN!* I heard the coach scream, everyone was suprised and sigh The Table The very next day 12:00 it was lunch in the reliable cafeteria Football team and others asked me to sit with em, I'm about to laugh in hysteria but I realized they were dead serious, so I look at my friends they glanced and shook their heads up and down and smiled marking the end I had to do it...I sat down with the team and decided to make conversation they were dissing others in different crowds and it angered me with aggravation The bell rung and I say "Gotta go" afraid to stay with them like I was blocked I walked by the bathroom and someone pulls me in and I was obviously shocked It was Alicia & Pierce and they said "You Got to sit with them dude" "And tell us everything they say, whether or not it's cool or rude" The Decision I don't know guys, just hearing their voice irritates me deeply "this is a miracle retard, is your brain suddenly sleepy?????? "The Jock Block is untouchable you've gotta find a flaw" FINE! Pierce replied by saying "Stand up straight so you'll look tall" Dude....I'm 6'0..."Yeah! but it wouldn't hurt at all you know?" Well you've got a jersey so it'll be believe.........hoe "You can borrow mine...and also Luke....you're undercover" "and if a cheerleader hits on you....she's now your pretend lover" I think I got it all thanks for the tips and information *While Walking Out Lucas says:* I might be the new leader of the HS nation Life With Popularity Over the last few weeks I turned into a monster hungered by power now a labelled jerk, like the good in my heart has been devoured went out with the boys one day to terrorize a part of the city old folks looking at us, like the new generation was made of pity anyways, the captain had a fake ID and bought us some beer I couldn't see myself like I had now been clouded with fear afterwards, we went outside and made our way to a backlane the guys grabbed a dude, and put a cover over his face acting insane bruising every inch of his body, and laughing hysterically we ganged up on him, he was laying in the ground pathetically Devastation Of Endings. One of us pulled out a loaded gun and handed it to yours truly, And Said " shoot this bitch ass fool in the head and do it cruelly I froze for a second debating against myself deciding what's right thinking of holding back but of that vision I just lost sight I just decided to do it so I crouched and pull the cover off his head but what I say that moment I prayed I would just go drop dead I was staring in the eyes of my best friend Pierce he looked devastated I put my head down.....amd the gun I cocked... it was not imaginated and that's the tale of deception and the end of a innocent life shattered try to forget that moment,but it's a memory of mine..that won't be battered |
11-27-04, 05:17 PM | #6 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: EDD6 76E4
^............................god too much typing
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11-27-04, 05:41 PM | #7 |
Flyweight
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This was feedback posted for For$akeN
IP: EDD6 76E4
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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11-27-04, 05:58 PM | #8 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: EDD6 76E4
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp p
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11-27-04, 06:21 PM | #9 | |
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
lol i could dq you for uppin that twice on diffrent names lucky i like you whore!!and i know youve been owned
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11-27-04, 06:25 PM | #10 | |
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This was feedback posted for Empire
IP: 182D 932C
just checkin tha polls out for this...good drop by both
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11-27-04, 06:41 PM | #11 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: EDD6 76E4
hehe............................................
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11-27-04, 11:24 PM | #12 | ||
COLD
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This was feedback posted for Empire
IP: 5671 DBDD
Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pp
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11-28-04, 04:08 PM | #13 | |
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 7975 32E9
Voted For: For$akeN
woah.... i thought you'd come dope on this one too empire.... but it looks like as if the topic poerty didnt suit you....yours was quite ok EMpire: yours was iigiht.....i thought you'd come more deeper in this poerty you had nice and deep meanings though... structre was messed but ya flow was really iight.... FOrsaken: you took the lead throughtout the poem...it was very deep and strong in its topic and meanign..i didnt like the first verse of it however.... didnt like how you worded it... VOte FOrsaken ..... i really though emp would take this easly..but.....
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11-29-04, 07:47 PM | #14 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: 8413 F2EB
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppp
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11-29-04, 11:09 PM | #15 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: 372F 4365
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