Listen;

^Check-it^,
Best ^respect-it^,
Cuz you could never get ^next-ta-it^,
I'm da ^best-ta-spit^,
N' leave ya ^chest-ripped^!
Forget tryin' ta ^grab-this^,
It's da ^maddest^,
N' ^phattest^,
You couldn't reach it if ya bought "the sky's the limit" ^ladders^!
^One-of-a-kind^,
Folks want it but it's ^mine^,
Put ^gunz-ta-spines^,
N' ^re-aligne^,
I can't help the fact I have ^fun-wit-rhymes^!
A killer wit ^lyrical-gats^,
Once you ^hear-it-it's-phat^,
Can't come ^near-cuz-ur-wack^!
^Bust-brains^,
^Cuss-names^,
It rips emcees n' makes ^guts-rain^!
Unknown ta ^rookies^,
Know ta kill ^pussies^,
Urgin' ta release ammo, so homies don't ^push-me^!
The one thing you don't ^got^,
Can't be beat like ^cops^,
As sweet as ^drop-tops^,
It's ^top-notch^,
Comes out blazin' like ^hot-glocks^!
It's original and ^hard-ta-beat^,
Fast n' Furious like when Ferrari ^cars-hit-da-streets^,
So deadly even if you read it might make ya ^heart-skip-a-beat^!

Lmao......... Whats up wit all Tha ^ , Lmao , This Piece was Aight , But Make Ur Lines Longer , And Up ur vocabulary and Wordplay..

wasnt too bad but as bash said that ^^ stuff is crap. you also gotta work on your structure, even lentgh lines.