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Old 06-03-07, 07:09 PM   #1
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Round 4: Mystic 3-0 .vs K.Stubbs 3-0 (RFV)

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Battles Up Tuesday.
House Rules 10-14 lines
Verses Due Friday.
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Old 06-03-07, 10:50 PM   #2
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lol ah..this should be a good battle
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Old 06-03-07, 10:50 PM   #3
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cant wait to fucking own u stubbs.
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Old 06-04-07, 01:52 PM   #4
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I'll drop early so you have enough time to prepare your verse.




Lets make this battle quick, u already leavin in a gurney
How the fuck are you supposed to beat me?
.............WHEN U CAN'T EVEN RUN THIS FUCKIN TOURNEY!
You only winning this, if ur dickriders show up...u big bitch
Only problem is you dont produce..n thats cuz you dickless
Whack fuck, go ''whack off''....n i aint showin no fake love
So go touch urself Cuz you aint ''beating'' me ok.stubbs!
You a hobo..but afta i beat u, I swear ill leave you alone
But we can still kick'box' N IM NOT TALKING ABOUT UR HOME!
Oh shit he aint breathing .....k.stubbs is dead guys!
.........We all look at his grave n all's it says is TEN LINES!!!


match me, 10 lines no more no less..n we will let the voters do the rest.

oh yeah and no feeding off my verse.
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Old 06-05-07, 04:23 PM   #5
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Definition of Mystic

someone who believes in the existence of realities beyond human comprehension




No wonder dude thinks he could actually beat me.
How the fuck you gon make moves...
...... believin in shit, that wouldn't even happen on tv.
Seriously Mys you a hardheaded fuckin bitch, that won't make it in rap
I'd hit you on the head with an ugly stik. but you'd just break it in half
You gon have to take this shit a step at a time. Cuz i'm outta ya field
Dude i read ya whole fuckin verse, and theres not 1 punch around me. STILL!
I'm tryin not to go over ya head. So i'm stayin @ ya shoulda's bitch
Cuz you not only over the edge, the top.....you done and over with
Sleep on me? You know they say an open mouth gotta closed mind.
....So, I'll stop that shit talkin dead!!! with a clothesline
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Old 06-05-07, 08:32 PM   #6
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ok..vote up............................
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Old 06-06-07, 11:18 AM   #7
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damn. lets get some votes.
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Old 06-06-07, 09:34 PM   #8
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Mystics:
Lets make this battle quick, u already leavin in a gurney
How the fuck are you supposed to beat me?
.............WHEN U CAN'T EVEN RUN THIS FUCKIN TOURNEY!
5/10 - Decent Opener.
You only winning this, if ur dickriders show up...u big bitch
Only problem is you dont produce..n thats cuz you dickless
5/10 - Decent Concept.
Whack fuck, go ''whack off''....n i aint showin no fake love
So go touch urself Cuz you aint ''beating'' me ok.stubbs!
6/10 - funny.
You a hobo..but afta i beat u, I swear ill leave you alone
But we can still kick'box' N IM NOT TALKING ABOUT UR HOME!
6/10 - niice.
Oh shit he aint breathing .....k.stubbs is dead guys!
.........We all look at his grave n all's it says is TEN LINES!!!
4/10 meh closer.
26/50

Stubbs:
No wonder dude thinks he could actually beat me.
How the fuck you gon make moves...
...... believin in shit, that wouldn't even happen on tv.
6/10 - niice opener.
Seriously Mys you a hardheaded fuckin bitch, that won't make it in rap
I'd hit you on the head with an ugly stik. but you'd just break it in half
5/10 - decent.
You gon have to take this shit a step at a time. Cuz i'm outta ya field
Dude i read ya whole fuckin verse, and theres not 1 punch around me. STILL!
4/10 - nah.
I'm tryin not to go over ya head. So i'm stayin @ ya shoulda's bitch
Cuz you not only over the edge, the top.....you done and over with
5/10 - decent.
Sleep on me? You know they say an open mouth gotta closed mind.
....So, I'll stop that shit talkin dead!!! with a clothesline
4/10 - meh closer.
24/50

I have to give this battle too Mystics, he had the better verse overall it was more solid throughout the whole thing, he had some niice punches and personals in there. Stubbs ya verse was good too... I just felt it had the weaker lines in there, although your opener was sick.
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Old 06-06-07, 10:13 PM   #9
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Lets make this battle quick, u already leavin in a gurney
How the fuck are you supposed to beat me?
.............WHEN U CAN'T EVEN RUN THIS FUCKIN TOURNEY!

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No wonder dude thinks he could actually beat me.
How the fuck you gon make moves...
...... believin in shit, that wouldn't even happen on tv.

Wow K you made this alot closer than I thought this would be. You both had nice openers, good personal. But I'm givin this to Mystic for the sole reason of he stayed consistent the whole time, he won by a little.

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Old 06-06-07, 10:30 PM   #10
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Thank's for the votes guys. 2-0 me.
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Old 06-07-07, 04:47 PM   #11
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Lets make this battle quick, u already leavin in a gurney
How the fuck are you supposed to beat me?
.............WHEN U CAN'T EVEN RUN THIS FUCKIN TOURNEY!
decent personal... lol
You only winning this, if ur dickriders show up...u big bitch
Only problem is you dont produce..n thats cuz you dickless
lol.. aight..
Whack fuck, go ''whack off''....n i aint showin no fake love
So go touch urself Cuz you aint ''beating'' me ok.stubbs!
eeh.. but ooo.kay...
You a hobo..but afta i beat u, I swear ill leave you alone
But we can still kick'box' N IM NOT TALKING ABOUT UR HOME!
aight...
Oh shit he aint breathing .....k.stubbs is dead guys!
.........We all look at his grave n all's it says is TEN LINES!!!
aight ending...

nice drop...



No wonder dude thinks he could actually beat me.
How the fuck you gon make moves...
...... believin in shit, that wouldn't even happen on tv.
ooo.kay..
Seriously Mys you a hardheaded fuckin bitch, that won't make it in rap
I'd hit you on the head with an ugly stik. but you'd just break it in half
nah....
You gon have to take this shit a step at a time. Cuz i'm outta ya field
Dude i read ya whole fuckin verse, and theres not 1 punch around me. STILL!
just flowing no diss...
I'm tryin not to go over ya head. So i'm stayin @ ya shoulda's bitch
Cuz you not only over the edge, the top.....you done and over with
ooo.kay..
Sleep on me? You know they say an open mouth gotta closed mind.
....So, I'll stop that shit talkin dead!!! with a clothesline
WTF?? weak ending...


you could of did way better then that stubbs... even after you had the chance to read hes verse whats sup??
well whatever happen aint work and.... LAY FEAR GETS MY VOTE HANDS DOWN....
 
Old 06-07-07, 04:58 PM   #12
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lay fear. aignt even IN this battle.


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Old 06-08-07, 11:07 AM   #13
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i think he meant mystic,

3-0 me..uppin
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Old 06-08-07, 12:57 PM   #14
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MY FULT ..... i was drunk and high as fuck lol.... i ment to say mystic.....

cuz i voted in lay-fear battle and i guess i thought i was still voting in hes battle LOL....
dont mind me and my drunk'en ways lol....


but yea vote: mystic.... is that better??
 
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Lets make this battle quick, u already leavin in a gurney
How the fuck are you supposed to beat me?
.............WHEN U CAN'T EVEN RUN THIS FUCKIN TOURNEY!
ok
You only winning this, if ur dickriders show up...u big bitch
Only problem is you dont produce..n thats cuz you dickless
no
Whack fuck, go ''whack off''....n i aint showin no fake love
So go touch urself Cuz you aint ''beating'' me ok.stubbs!
no
You a hobo..but afta i beat u, I swear ill leave you alone
But we can still kick'box' N IM NOT TALKING ABOUT UR HOME!
good
Oh shit he aint breathing .....k.stubbs is dead guys!
.........We all look at his grave n all's it says is TEN LINES!!!
ok

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No wonder dude thinks he could actually beat me.
How the fuck you gon make moves...
...... believin in shit, that wouldn't even happen on tv.
ok ha
Seriously Mys you a hardheaded fuckin bitch, that won't make it in rap
I'd hit you on the head with an ugly stik. but you'd just break it in half
nah
You gon have to take this shit a step at a time. Cuz i'm outta ya field
Dude i read ya whole fuckin verse, and theres not 1 punch around me. STILL!
ok
I'm tryin not to go over ya head. So i'm stayin @ ya shoulda's bitch
Cuz you not only over the edge, the top.....you done and over with
ok
Sleep on me? You know they say an open mouth gotta closed mind.
....So, I'll stop that shit talkin dead!!! with a clothesline
ok

- Mysitc had one punch that stood out...K had consistency...Mystic seems to make alot of his verses large but i really dont see a definite punch...the box theme is a lil played...maybe becuz at my site they use it all the time but I just wasnt feelin that so i mean thats the only verse that stuck out the whole battle...but Stubbs had consistency as i said earlier so...

V/K.Stubbs
 
 


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