just a lil trak i put down, first time i used acid pro an shit.

let me kno what yall think.


Buss Ya Guns Inna Di Air

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good or bad ill take yall criticism, i just edited it, its up again, go check it.

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this shiiiiit was arite....not 2 clever...sound like everything else...and the lyricz were plain....the beat was coo, again nuthn special....ure quality aint all that great neither, but werk on that shiit


BATTLE ME (unless u scared)

1Luv
Cin Ladin

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ok ok good look on the feedback... anyone else

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i kno i need ta work on my flo a bit, let me if kno anythin else?

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ya it was coo, u got sum shit to work out tho fasho

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the quality is nice if u lissen to it on hi fi or download the mp3. its jus the lo fi das garbage.

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You the last shit about bein a herbavor was pretty tight. You still need to work on the flow tho. Don't rush the beat like you do. kick back on it and roll wit that shit. And for your quality... move your face away from the mike. If its records low, adjust the volume in Acid and through some eq on it until it sounds nice. Work on the lyrical eq by itself... without the beat. Then listen to it with the beat and adjust the levels. Through a little bit of reverb on it if you have to. Other than that... just elevate your lyrics like everyone of us need to do. Your shitll start to sound nice when u keep workin on it.

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good lookin dog

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the song is still cookin, i gotta add another verse and change the beat and extend the hook.

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Shit is hot man keep up tha work..

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good lookin... any more comments?

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look man my guns like my cock... dey cud buss in any direction... any more feedback?
wut else yall think i need ta work on?
wut yall like so far?

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Get Rid Of Acid Pro .. It's The Wackest Program Out ..

What Are You ? You Sound Middle Eastern Lol .

Flow Was Weak , And Also Was The Content.

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