yea weve been tryin to get on a collab so he approached me with this n i cleaned house...haha jp pretty good song, check it out....

haters - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4639286

links - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3103514

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3103517

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lol jay dont eb lazy
you need two more links

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willa when did you become such a bully mod!

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Yea yo...ahahahaha.i like the intro yo...

Gangsta shit...

El rey" nice come up homeboy like this shit...like the way you flowed an delivered the hook...Verse was a lil choppy but you deffinitly comin up since i last spoke wit you....like the concept of the verse though...like we always do buck haters...

Hook: Same

Jay" Delivery an lyrics was on point..like the way u came at the track...like the concept...flow is crazy though kid...i see u stepped ur game up a lil since i last heard from...

Good shit my dudes over-all nice track man...seriously shit was hot like'd the hook even though some spots was choppy...it still came out crisp...8.10 ONE

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listenin...

extasy line feelin
.....feelin the hook

flow kinda icky on the 1st verse....but u def got some emotion in my eyes

2nd verse....whoooo liked the flow.....nice multis...juggled with it (thumbs up)
back up lines feelin......emotion yessur..
sidewalks line feelin.....


this was a coo ass track....made me rock my head.....keep it up yall...hit em

lol at the knock knock part
hook is dope delivery could be uppped a lil bit
el ray flow is kinda choppy delivery could be upped alot of nice lines.
jay delivery was cool flow was really nice in the beginning didnt really like it when you slowed down. you on the hook your volume could be upped a lil.

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wtf, iunno wut it is but the flow is off beat on the 1st hook mayne. the others are str8 but some reason this 1st one is off. i like it, but after like the first 4 bars it starts to get off beat. 1st verse, flow is choppy as hell, gets sorta boring after a while, not really no style switches or nothin. i like you're delivery n voice tho, but ya flow is just choppy. 2nd verse, feelin this alot more. flow's on point, lyrics is sick lol not punchline type sick, just sounds good. maybe its the rhyme scheme im likin. delivery is good as well. fell off a bit at the end when you started to slow the flow down i think but besides that it's str8. ehh, iight track i guess

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Listenin'..beat yeah I like this ebat alot i got it on here...

what's good with the flow on the hook, it's kinda off yall...like tony said...I think mixing mighta messed up..

aight OYD on the building/..

you kinda packing too many words in the verse making ya flow off, its mad choppy here..delivery and confidence is good...and ya dubbs is mad off, i rlly think something happend in ure cool edit...like u kinda messd up the placing in mistake....

default lol, what's good, flow is real nice....delivery is nice..sounding a lil like tito, delivery is nice....presence nice..lyrics good..OYD NUKKA..

RTF to the "Sweat That Body" NEW SINGLE POSSIBLE VIDEO ON MAINSTREAM MARKETS..OYDDD!

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first off the beat is beastial.... fast flow / slow flow... its good for both... shit is crazy

hook... this shit is pretty hard... i see what they were sayin... but i dont think it was the placement as much as it was the beat kickin in ... Hook is solid though

Rey Rey : first time i heard you on a faster style... and they way you went at it made it your own like... your cadence and shit... diff... but it worked... choppy...?? nah... i dont think so... i think thats how its supposed to sound... like how i be doin my shit... its not choppy... its controlled chaos... it works... its outside the box if anything...you developin a beast like swagger homie

hook- this shit grew on me pretty much after the 2nd go round... Haters gonna hate... werd up...


286 : haha yea man you came in here following Reys lead on that fast shit... you put it down here... libs was tight... flow was on point aint realy fall off anywhere noticiable nahmean...

i woulda rocked this wit yall fo sho... this shit was flames 9/10 fo sho

January mixtape status even

keep turnin out them hits fellas

Holla at ya boi

-Don Tito Bronsky

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Playing.....

Intro is attention grabbing... beats ok, rey comes in nice, hooks cool. Rey your flows good "im not just another dumbass with marketing skills" < flow was off slightly there, but nothing overally noticable.
Your dubs cut off at random spots but meh, you layed it solid bro. good job.

Jay comes in nice, good combinationm rey with the deep voice jay a bit more high pitched. Good flow, lyrics all good... kids on side walks bar is cool.

jay on the hook doesnt do it complete justice, maybe both a you doing the hook at the end switching it up.

rey saying haters gonna hate jay saying next line... blah.. just wasnt feeling just jay on that hook.

Overall cool track... Maybe polish the hook a bit more.