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09-10-05, 12:17 PM
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A piece i'ma do key-style
IP: 8A05 210E
it'z called
Leave Me Alone ..so checc it out[Hook 2X]
Jus Leave Me Alone..cuz i need sum time 2 think 2 smoke up sum dro..& drown my payn wit drinks tha pressura is real..got me 2 tha point i'ma flip so jus listen 2 tha words..as i get off into real shit ..it feel$ like tha world i$ collap$ing down on top of me..
..whether it'$ blood or drug money..how come y'all can't ju$ let it b.. ..i hate tha facc dat $o many people'$ heart$ r filled wit jealou$ly.. ..what'$ up wit tha aggre$$ion..ladie$ ju$ cuz he ain't buy u a pre$ent.. ..evathang i$ ba$ed round $crilla..no wonda y thang$ cost u eva red cent.. ..if u live in lower class..2 mo$t in tha U.S.A. ur considered as a pea$ant.. ..poverty 4 $um rea$on i$ a nece$$ity..by dat Fag Bu$h & hi$ wife on tv.. ..wheneva u lea$e, u gotta pay a cova fee..& y ga$ price$ aren't cheap.. ..i feel like Pac, wit All Eye$ On Me..on tha lookout 4 hataz..so i can't sleep.. *..jus a small preview of wut i'm workin fa sho & i got otha drop comin up soon..*
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09-10-05, 01:47 PM
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£ivin a £yfe of Çrhyme
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IP: E638 7DF0
looks good so far, keep workin on it fam im eager to see it when i gets completely finished....I like the hook too, good work
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09-10-05, 01:56 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 735C 7BDD
i like it could i possibly hop on it
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09-11-05, 10:27 PM
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IP: 8A05 210E
thanx 4 tha good feedbacc i appreciate it alot & i got ya also if nethang of y'all needs honest feed netime
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Choose words carefully when you address me
You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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09-12-05, 03:12 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: D06E 6198
ok im going to key up a verse for this ill have it done tommorow
also im making a forum for ppl to post their work
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