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08-27-03, 10:29 PM | #1 | ||||||
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"Underground Rap Demon" (SICK Lyrics.. Nuthing But Hotness.. Sho Down On Tha Beat..)
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New Shit.. Produced By Sho Down.. Strong Lyrics..
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08-28-03, 10:30 AM | #2 | ||||||
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your delivery was of its tempo with the beat....you started off good, but your flow of delivery was off for the first 5 seconds of the track....but then you caught up after that.....the hook was ok i guess....production was good for sure....i'm feelin your fast pace rappin shit tho, you go at a steady flow at sum points and then you just pick up the speed and just rhyme one word in 1 whole bar, i like dat.....this was a good track dawg, keepin doing your thing......OnE
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08-28-03, 11:13 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C65E 719E
no doubt.. thanx man
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08-28-03, 12:26 PM | #4 | |||||||
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feelin it, the beat was hott really feelin tha production. The flow was tuff. I like the way you flow. the only part i didnt like was the chorus. but everything else was hott. Keep it comin if u need beats holla. PEACE
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08-28-03, 05:01 PM | #5 | ||||||
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word.. no doubt..
yeh.. the hook was a throw in to finish the track |
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