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11-28-03, 09:38 PM | #1 | ||||||
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"My Dedication" (Round 3 For Tourney - DOPE SHIT - PEEP!)
IP: C65E 719E
My Round 3 Vs Lootchiano And Sol.
Produced By: Braile Written By: Me http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=713949&q=Lo http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=713949&q=Hi http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=713949 Lyrics so many broken promises and broken dreams i dont know if its the cause for this life got me seein things from a different perspective im decated especially solvin crimes like the flip of a detective badge, for what i said i had, is not what i want if i grow up imma blow up to be gettin on, stage movin the crowd provin to you im loud provin loosely my body moves never settlin down and if it does, its a break in performance, the way to explore shit, i hate to ignore it i take ways im real, filled wit skill, a born enemy with enmity cus im ready to be signed god i want a deal, its been sent to me the heavenly love, provided me with musical skill straight from above debatin my love wit the face of a monstor i gots ta show up to rock concerts not bust slugs, im an entrepreneur Hook i love hiphop the music is mine imma do it all my life, imma use it to shine no1s takin me out, with chalk on the ground im dedicated to this rap shit so walk wit me now soon enough ill be drivin to the city walkin down broadway handin out my cd's till my... hands is empty you standin to rap wit me, labels catch exceeding graivty and jam wit me they see im prosperious willin to drop shit, a business man with strong legs standin on top of it, wit my mans askin to drop shit, see my fans will never rep my cause to stop shit, labels say im signed by my acts that my music is good enough to be heard but im blinded by facts shinin in the back of an ac, shakled and trapped they got people just for laughin at that what can i do...i know my music is true, i guess i gotta find some others not as stupid as you, see i look at the papers, im checkin the boxes, first 23 ask about guns and them watches im so dedicated, if i told you that years from now would you believe if i said i made it or would you stand there, listen to nas, cringin ya jaws, music to me is a symbol of god i still rap for me, still given my all, still standin on my feet, still waitin to fall i know i eventually will, but ill get up again, i said i was an emcee from beginning to end still lovin it still rubbin it in, more hiphop for the soul and mind than you noticed before i was knockin, you just had to open the door, i was chosen to expose my vocals to get you all on the floor .. now i made my move, took time to make music and erase some dudes, replace some crews, my image on the map will place my raps in time for me to eat my food FeedBack And Links Please! |
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12-01-03, 07:39 PM | #2 | ||||||
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12-03-03, 11:12 AM | #3 | ||||
\/ pissing me off!!!!
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the lyrics are aiight.
you sound nice on the beat, you sound different. nice lyrics, nice flow. you gotta watch out on your breathing you made a few breaths hat stood out in there. aiiight peace
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12-06-03, 01:33 AM | #4 | ||||||
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yeh.. i have heart problems.. so that = no breath control
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