Joint I did where I just had a vision on where my life is going....just visioning my self surving through all these stuggles, after fighting thru life and paying my dues get to the point of relaxing one day..humming in that rockin chair like the old folks do....

Peep it out...
Rocking Chair Humming

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Bang On The Table Productions

for real yo this beta is some craziness

you sound like royce da 5'9"...perfect flow...nice rock on the shit...just bouncy shit!@

DAMN...you nice dog for real man this good shit...definitely good quality, maybe turn down ya verse a little and get a better quality on the beat...but this sound perfect!!

THE HOOK...i think you coulda work on the hummmin better...the melody weird...dont sound like it fits the beat

this straight flow man...no metas..all emotions...perfect attitude on the beat!


im really feelin this track! keep em comin

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Thanks man

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Bang On The Table Productions

Free up for a KICKASS Song. You're goin places man.

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nice song man i wasnt feelign at as much as the first dude..but its still pretty good.. yeah everything about the song was pretty good excpet the hook.. it didnt seem like the humming was intuned with the beat.. if seems like you started the humming at the wrong time of the song.. still and overall good track 8/10..

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Indeed above Par skillz... need a little work on some areas but nothing that is major. Solid Flow... I liked this... dope ride on a tight beat manz... ILL... propz to ya.

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let me first say the humming... is really off. no. i absolutely hate that part, however, EVERYTHING else is great. You have a cool flow, the way u extend certain words... and it gets better towards the end. I like the hook but dont like the humming. i do think that humming should be there, but on key.. lol. otherwise great track. nice skills indeed.

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