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Old 02-09-04, 08:22 PM   #1
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Sand(3-1) vs. Jacent(1-0)

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Old 02-09-04, 10:26 PM   #2
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lol, i'm in and stuff.
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Old 02-09-04, 11:28 PM   #3
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Hi...

I'm going 14
 
Old 02-12-04, 02:29 AM   #4
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.

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Diggin this bitch up, brushing the dirt off I'm hit with
Sands shit with no water, so I'm slowly decanting the liquids
Guess what? I fixed it, with my hands & no tools
& with a name like that, HE was the reject of Road Rules!
Speaking word for word bitch, sonned & I'm in and stuffed
Your crew: Kevin, Patrick, John..wait, thats just dudes you fucked
I can keep going punk, keep up with me, you'll need a stop watch
Comes w/ so many played lines, mistakes u for a hood game of hop skotch
Just hold me, homo thug was just tryin to show me..
That he got his first hairs growing, like Tiger's goatee
So what, no one likes you, yet still a reason not to breathe
& u know its bad when u got as much respect as Young P in the league
I flip shit on ya, & basically shove back in your hand
But I'm a nice guy, & leave my shit covered in Sand
 
Old 02-12-04, 03:14 PM   #5
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are you serious?
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.

his name is the gayest, plus his style needs some grave replacements
but fuck constructive criticism, dude needs a new frame n' foundation
i'll slay his relations, the funny thing is that he claims he's dope n shit
but natrually, webster says he 'lies at lengths' , dude's a hopeless bitch ..
people think this kids got some flow,. lol, i'll dry his ass out like a raisen
while u question why crossing 2 fags is the only way to make Ja / Cent
you gay bitch, blah i'm sick of killing of you, i'll just shrug my shoulders ..
and think i can half ass a verse and eat you without a fuckin' closer. . .


dead in 8, homo.
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Old 02-13-04, 11:58 AM   #6
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Wow... actually a pretty dope battle here.
Pretty well close in most categories

However,
people think this kids got some flow,. lol, i'll dry his ass out like a raisen
while u question why crossing 2 fags is the only way to make Ja / Cent

^^^
That took the whole battle for me

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Old 02-13-04, 01:00 PM   #7
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Sand/Alex, whatever...

Took this cuz his verse was harder and crueler.

He clowned Jacent with the "crossing fags" line and the non-closer.

Clowned him bad.

Jacent did ok with the nameplay...
But that's what I did last week (and I did it better) against Sand.
And still lost.
Now I see why.

Harder shots, more embarrassment for Jacent to eat...
Than Sand.

That's it.

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Old 02-13-04, 03:55 PM   #8
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yeah sand takes it with a more rounded verse with some evil punchlines.....
nice battle and nice to see more good heads back in/in the league.....

his name is the gayest, plus his style needs some grave replacements
but fuck constructive criticism, dude needs a new frame n' foundation
^Dope opener

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Old 02-13-04, 05:15 PM   #9
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alex, my name too

yeah, sand took this.. not a bad battle at all though
not a bad read. Sands punches just hit harder than
jacents.

the opener and ja/cent line was dope..
 
Old 02-13-04, 07:17 PM   #10
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Damn...before I read the verses...I expected a murder on Jacent's part due to Sand's lack of lines, but Sand 8 him. <---yeah, that was corny. Anyway, not too bad of a battle...but the fact that it was even close when Sand only dropped 8 lines is sad. Come doper Jacent...

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Old 02-14-04, 08:05 AM   #11
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Vote - Sand

Jacent Came Nice & Thought He Would Have Won It, But Sand Came With Some Dope Lines. The Ja/Cent Line Won The Battle.
Good Battle Though Guys.
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Old 02-14-04, 07:02 PM   #12
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vOTE=Alex

Dude came better even though both battlers were weak with played out lines they were still ok, Alex had a way better flow better personals but i saw no creativity multis or really good punches from either mc
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Old 02-15-04, 11:02 PM   #13
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Jacent:
Speaking word for word bitch, sonned & I'm in and stuffed
Your crew: Kevin, Patrick, John..wait, thats just dudes you fucked

coo

Alex:
only good lines were the constructive criticism, which was used by Glass..
.. and the Ja / Cent, which was used by baron last week


so, no..


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Old 02-16-04, 10:37 AM   #14
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you quoted a homo line as the best line of his verse.

like those aren't the most played concepts in battling. by far, lol

and i've never seen anyone use either of those lines.
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Old 02-16-04, 11:28 AM   #15
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Alex wins 4-1
Jacent loses 1-1 (signs out)
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