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Old 11-05-06, 10:54 AM   #1
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9. Sonny Dimebags (13-6) vs 10. Stanza (6-8)

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Old 11-06-06, 04:44 PM   #2
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..................................chexin in ...........................
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Old 11-08-06, 11:32 PM   #3
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Man

You being a bitch if you dont show to this battle its only words
But you cant beat the shit out of shit ....I see your only turds
stop opening up ya mouth man infact dont even touch the keyboard
Bcuz ya mind is so slow that when your keystyle even your keys get bored
I dont even know why i bothered bcuz when your spit you beat yaself up
Sonny Took his ps2 from the basement to the attic
.................................................. .....and he still cant step his game up
You Jus plain stink man You couldnt hustle yo flow so here Have so Dollar Mints !
Sprry for leavin out when you dropprd its jus that Im wacktose Intolerant
In The end You'll see sonny in a Bag with his dimes I aint aint talkin bout Money
Then i'll come to yo funneral kick over ya casket
..............................................Watc h Ya family Laugh Like it was funny

-done-

quickie bcuz i dont think he's gonna show up So Blah!!
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Old 11-09-06, 10:23 PM   #4
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Wow ................Another week down the motherfuckin drain ............................
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Old 11-10-06, 12:03 AM   #5
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ightt mannn imm heree
Yo, me not show up,you know I will, juss grow up
huggin a suicide bomber,is only way you'll blow up
Nah, this cat should spit for millions,earn him a check
and jump when he raps......... a rope around his neck
Dude is really confident,Ill drop this kid like a broken condom
and divide up his whig, like it was a part of a math problem
Power bomb him in the dirt and have Stanza busted n' throwin up mud
You'd think he was gettin jumped in a gang,way he was throwin up blood
Im shady,I'll cut his cars breaks just to kill this kid
Like Eminem,way I'm makin Stan drive of a bridge
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Old 11-10-06, 12:28 AM   #6
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Nothing..

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Nah, this cat should spit for millions,earn him a check
and jump when he raps......... a rope around his neck
Im shady,I'll cut his cars breaks just to kill this kid
Like Eminem,way I'm makin Stan drive of a bridge

IMO sonny took this with ease.... stanza you didnt realy have anything man

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Old 11-10-06, 09:59 AM   #7
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Wateva Man ..............Uppin for more votes
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Old 11-10-06, 10:06 AM   #8
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Nah, this cat should spit for millions,earn him a check
and jump when he raps......... a rope around his neck

vs

well, nothing

bad battle... stanza fucking sucked... Sonny came with alot of very basic stuff

basic, average stuff > shitty stuff

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Old 11-10-06, 01:08 PM   #9
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Nah, this cat should spit for millions,earn him a check
and jump when he raps......... a rope around his neck
Im shady,I'll cut his cars breaks just to kill this kid
Like Eminem,way I'm makin Stan drive of a bridge

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Nothing...

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Old 11-10-06, 02:58 PM   #10
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Nah, this cat should spit for millions,earn him a check
and jump when he raps......... a rope around his neck
Dude is really confident,Ill drop this kid like a broken condom
and divide up his whig, like it was a part of a math problem

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Nothing

Pretty weak battle, Sonny at least had some shit that wasn't that bad, Stanza's stuff was pretty much all played and poorly worded.

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Old 11-10-06, 03:48 PM   #11
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Power bomb him in the dirt and have Stanza busted n' throwin up mud
You'd think he was gettin jumped in a gang,way he was throwin up blood
^THE GRAPHIC NATURE OF THIS MADE IT OK FOR ME
Im shady,I'll cut his cars breaks just to kill this kid
Like Eminem,way I'm makin Stan drive of a bridge
^DECENT NAMEPLAY I GUEESS


V/ Sonny

Weak battle. Alotta Stanza’s punches just didn’t make any Logical sence like the Keys getting bored thing
How the fuck does Keys get bored? The step your game up play station thing was played and
The kick the casket over closer coulda been better had that been reworded to something making
Some sence. Sonny I’ve seen a lot better from him. His lines wasn’t that hot either but he had e-nuff to win this one.
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Old 11-10-06, 04:21 PM   #12
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nothing

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Nah, this cat should spit for millions,earn him a check
and jump when he raps......... a rope around his neck
Power bomb him in the dirt and have Stanza busted n' throwin up mud
You'd think he was gettin jumped in a gang,way he was throwin up blood
Im shady,I'll cut his cars breaks just to kill this kid
Like Eminem,way I'm makin Stan drive of a bridge

^ the wording was a bit awkward in the second one, but haven't seen the idea before so i quoted it. your verse was top heavy on threats, but you came a lot better than he did so:


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Old 11-10-06, 06:48 PM   #13
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I dont even know why i bothered bcuz when your spit you beat yaself up
Sonny Took his ps2 from the basement to the attic
.................................................. .....and he still cant step his game up


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Yo, me not show up,you know I will, juss grow up
huggin a suicide bomber,is only way you'll blow up
Nah, this cat should spit for millions,earn him a check
and jump when he raps......... a rope around his neck

Im shady,I'll cut his cars breaks just to kill this kid
Like Eminem,way I'm makin Stan drive of a bridge


sonny had a some nice lines...felt his verse more...stanza that first line was bad man lol...even if it was a no show verse still shoulda dropped alittle better especially u dropped earlier then the deadline...i seen u come better

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Old 11-11-06, 05:31 AM   #14
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Up over no-shows.
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Old 11-11-06, 11:45 PM   #15
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