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Old 02-09-04, 07:29 PM   #1
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Mystery~murdera(8-2) vs. Trapt Wit(8-2)

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Nice records.. one of you leaves with it worse
check in's by: wednesday.
verses due: friday, 12 am Eastern Time.
Read LLL rules. Read LLL announcement.
Agree on line limit in check in.
 
Old 02-09-04, 07:30 PM   #2
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Old 02-10-04, 01:53 PM   #3
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The Eclipse...

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Old 02-10-04, 10:21 PM   #4
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Meh... I'm not going to wait days like dude will do
Here goes nothing... literally as I dspose of you
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Same record same style... We be pushin envelopes dude
Only I do it on the mic
...M~M just works in the mail room
Destroy this goon, just another punk with overrated clout
Created Eclipse for an excuse
... for when I knock this fuckers lights out
Sig gasses you up, but are you dope now? Aww shit no
I'm mean your more of a softcore vet
...then a fucking chevy pillow
Evolve's style? 13th's punches? And you know whats worse
Is that I swore...
...Attack of the Clones was a movie til I read ya verse
And I know whats coming
...so dont even bitch that this was bitten
Or I'll collect so many chips from ya teeth to play poker with em
You lost our only meeting... what more can I say?
Other than now I'll pass you in the league
...while you'll just pass.... away
A feeder like none other... I hate this tubby fuck
Trapt the pick of the litter..
...you just walk ditches picking it up
Hear that dun? The LLL retirement home just beckoned
So I'll give you a second to prepare...
... nah, instead just prepare for second
Years on RB with no audio... we all know this kid wont get signed
How ya expect to see the winners circle..
...when you saw my drop and flat-lined
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Old 02-13-04, 09:24 AM   #5
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This is LLL. Remember that kids.

I dont need Auschin Cutcher To proves this kids a gimmick
Cuz While Rb Thinks Outside the box... Chrit Just Lives in it!!
This Kids finish, besides OuR Records show how badly ur beat
If Ur A Legend? Why's Ur B.I.G.est Victory on a puff daddy Cd?!
See Me, I know that there's hardly a hope.....................
u gotta tag team of skills - the text sux n the audio blows!!
ur heads damn near hollow so its not hard to empty the rest
Cuz ur Wit Aint Just Trapt... Its Stuck & Fuckin Bleedin 2 Death!!
Rb Put this Emcee to rest, Seems duke cant concede to the truth
Cuz The Truth of ur sig isnt "dont smoke" its No Crew Needed... YOU!!
Be That Its True, Learn lots of post doesn't mean Ur Craft is Nice
this is why ur only RE-spected when ur fitted for contacts twice!!
n Perhaps their right when sayin the Economies back At The top..
sad thing 4 u is while everybodys Blue Chip ur still the Laughing Stock!!
And Humorous Its Not, I'm Back, Ur Scared so u Doubt Against me......
n U Aint been runnin shit since..
.........................Evolve sonned u & U ran OUT of the league!!!!
n Even I Cant Remember when u were sonned worse than this, guy
But lets face it u Came with Fire twice... once u beat me...
............ the other was the 4th of July
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Old 02-13-04, 09:28 AM   #6
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edited before votes... to backspace on a part where i had two spaces...
Nothin serious.

We're both knockin some rust off slowly, nice drop...
uppin 4 votes.
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Old 02-13-04, 09:46 AM   #8
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lol I laughed a lot in this battle

Trapt-played lines a lot but still iight
Mail room one..that was horrible honestly
but ya verse flowed well but ya style
jus dint work for me

MM-ya disses always seem original to me &
thats why i like readin ya verses. The B.I.G wasnt a
hard punch but it still made me laff.
I liked the Evolve line too. a few quotables
but ya took this fairly easily.

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Old 02-13-04, 10:50 AM   #10
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lol I laughed a lot in this battle

Trapt-played lines a lot but still iight
Mail room one..that was horrible honestly
but ya verse flowed well but ya style
jus dint work for me

MM-ya disses always seem original to me &
thats why i like readin ya verses. The B.I.G wasnt a
hard punch but it still made me laff.
I liked the Evolve line too. a few quotables
but ya took this fairly easily.

V/M~M


Hmm... I wonder what was played honestly...
But whatever kiddo
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(not trying to sway at all M~M, had to say something about dumbfuck however)
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Old 02-13-04, 11:40 AM   #11
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1)Trapt's opener was better for sure, MM came played.
2)Trapt took the second line with the personal, MM came with forced wordplay and an attempt at a personal.
3)MM's 'tag team' line crushed the weakness of the 'chevy pillow'.
4)MM's personal smacks around Chrit's movie line.
5)MM scores again with the personal on the sig, overpowers the 'poker' threat.
6)Trapt makes a comeback and hits a good personal, MM goes for the word manipulation and comes up a bit short.
7)Both these motherfuckers connected with this one and each one took a knee for an 8 count. This was probably the best diss for both.
8)Trapt took the wordplay on this one, MM got the personal, but I read that battle and it was real close, no sonning in my opinion.
9)MM takes the wordplay and personal on this one. Trapt spit nice too, but almost anything 'flat-lined' is kinda played.

So after 9 exchanges, in my eyes...

The fucking thing is tied.

So I'm a have ta force a decision on the tied punch up above...

And for being upon current events, and for using some real nice wordplay...
MM.

So, overall, this fight went to MM for the accumulation of punches.

But it was so fucking close.

Very dope battle, best I've read in a while.

And pretty dope the way I spit votes like a fight commentator, eh?
I remain funny as shit...in my own eyes!!!

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Old 02-13-04, 12:02 PM   #12
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0-2?

Meh...
And if you dont fully understand the pillow line please ask me about it.
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Old 02-13-04, 12:05 PM   #13
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i understand the pillow line, and i
don't really think that this battle
was all that close. mM used a
puff daddy victory line, that was
whack as hell. trapt came mad
original, and that attack of the
clones line was fresh, ...pz

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Chrit had a played line or 2, but made up for it quickly
M M used a puff daddy line that would of been wack in '95
He also used a played as fuck outside the box line
The re-spected and no crew needed were nice, but the smoking reference and the dash and the CAPITALIZATION hurt the line
Chrit came consistent and everything was pretty original
Better wording could of led to a few being harder hitting than they were, but

Chrit takes this with a better overall verse

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Old 02-13-04, 07:05 PM   #15
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Extremely close battle. Tough choice actually. That chevy/pillow line was pretty weak if you ask me. Yes, I understood it. Chrit also had a played line or two. With that said, M~M had a played line here or there also, and your closer sucked ass. I'm not breakin shit down or getting into detail. I'm nautious...so you'll get an explained vote from me next week.

Other than what was said above...both of you had some extremely dope punches laiden in your verse. Nice creativity and originality on both parts. I've gotta give it to...

Vote ~ MM due to more hard hitting personals where Chrit's were just creative punches that could be used against anyone. Very dope verse from both though.
 
 


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