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02-10-05, 12:12 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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Nostradamus vs Hells Fire
IP: 06B8 DBF2
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20-30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Dumb Shit Topic: "Phobia" Peace, goodluck.. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 02-11-05 at 12:12 AM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
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02-10-05, 12:30 AM
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IP: 722A E9FC
Hells Fire has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 12:30 AM.
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02-10-05, 12:31 AM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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IP: 722A E9FC
checkin in yo im gonna have a good story in here soon
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02-10-05, 12:11 PM
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IP: 2E24 A1AD
Nostradamus has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 12:11 PM.
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02-10-05, 10:03 PM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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IP: C63E BF93
good luck i know he wont need it to nostradamus...phobia well here we go
Intro Woke up alarm rang, 830, looked over, somethin shitty tomorrow fast came, hate anxiety, rolled over, insullin shity i hate needles takin thy blood, i hate vials fillin wit my blood i hate doctors orderin blood, i hate the rubberband around arm Phobia milkin me for blood but i only 140, lookin away i still feelin hazy pumpin my blood vampire crazy, i fear needles n go womb baby ever since i was little id see n flip, took a pint,a sucker all i get my vein would tense n id faint,kids at schoo laugh when think id get a cookie but blood i aint,red cells mine no blood to bank no red to cross cant donate,if die from loss blood let thy fate acupuncture not my rate, i shake on first needle 5min n faint bussed outta school early, if i got disease diabetis i die surely girls look damn embarass me, mom get home see n greet me id cry myself to sleep at my flaw,look at the sky n wish dawn diabolic diabetis took my friend, diabolic prick look my end angelic no gene got da fiend, i wake up battlin worryin dream blood is life why take, im spinin in the office givin da take juice is here doc take, my eyes spinin like a clownin fake this my phobia this my fear, now i showya no cheer rather bow ya for tryin queer, next time havin beer because i rather scuff thy knee, then them prick off me like cyclopes island in the odysee, fear is fuckin blindin me .........i dont like blood takin needles not as much imagery but emotion is there hate um man hate um yo can ya edit my shit so its italics n bold titles n centered because it dont have the tools in this verse box
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02-14-05, 11:40 AM
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IP: 2E24 A1AD
Phobia Deep between the scene............An issue arose.. Like whispering flows; the word had a glistening glow.. It was a new thing.......Everybody pondered on whos king.. Some who bring, knowledge did well but no ones losing.. Around that time, I was using; abusing the state of my mind.. So confusing; a neusense.. No hate for my kind.. Maybe a way to define; a young kid, creating a rhyme.. Misplaced in a time; where rap was making a dyme.. I blaintantly find; a lack of new rappers that rock the industry.. See god has given me; a ministry to drop a mystery.. Plots is thickening..............More rocks is glistening.. ....I'm listening; waiting to ROAR, I'm never whispering.. ...But... .......I can see myself wasting my time.. Basing my rhymes, on some small--mistake at the time.. Just aching to find; the right words for showing the youth.. You know what I do.. & Old raps are flowing the truth.. ..But not the new school yo.. Too many are saying fuck it.. Too many just blame ruckus; some musta just came dumbest.. They still love us; but understand we roll with the real.. A lot of cats pretend to be hard; to haul in a deal.. Their falling for real.. Blinded by commercialism.. These hurtful visions--curse the system that--works with rhythem.. No curtain system, stars is living exposed lives.. With ghost writes; on most nights, they reclude like a low life.. I dont like; to say I'm worried but kinda bored.. The find a horde; of artists that define the sort.. Of person; thats worse than a retard for cirtain.. They leave the game hurting; no teeth and blood spurtin.. I'm done working; for morons that check for skill.. I got rhymes; but my phobia is are you for real? Are you for real? Are you for real? Word.. What are you scared of? ..Understand what raps actually here for.. ...Nostradamus............ 2005. |
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02-14-05, 08:39 PM
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Uppin.
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02-15-05, 12:17 AM
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Uppin............................................. ..
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02-15-05, 10:46 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Uppin.............................................
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02-15-05, 10:49 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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This was feedback posted for Hells Fire
IP: B1A5 868C
Nice shit y'all
Dont really know much about topicals, so i aint gonna vote, i'll leave it too the professionals so ta speak, but Nostras topic seemed deeper an the better vocab, but they were both enjoyable, good luck ta y'all Peace
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02-16-05, 10:54 AM
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IP: 7C37 5128
Thanks man.
Wish we could get some votes though sometime soon.. -_- |
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02-16-05, 10:48 PM
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IP: 7C37 5128
Uppin for votes..
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02-16-05, 11:05 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Nostradamus
Nos- Your verse was so good...you stayed on topic, also had good creativity...vocab was nice n so was your structure, easy to read n everything...you get my vote because your topic verse was just better, so was your vocab....8.7/10..... Hells Fire- Your verse was good too but not good enough...you stayed on topic...your structure ehhh decent could be fixin up a little...but overall you did well, but just not good enough......6.1/10.......
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02-16-05, 11:07 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Also sorry for posting again.......But since i voted in yall battle think you can drop an honest vote in my battle against Intensify Effect........because thats gettin slept on......thanks.......1
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02-17-05, 07:28 AM
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IP: 7C37 5128
Uppin.............................................
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