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12-22-04, 04:49 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Tragic Wit Tactics
IP: 1E90 22BF
New fiya joint from yourz truly holla back with the feedback
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12-22-04, 05:30 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 1055 D992
It's an alright track, I got that beat, quality was horrible. With more clarity I could tell you a little more, but I could barely understand it, good work though, stay up.
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12-23-04, 01:31 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 1E90 22BF
Fixed wrong version on it
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12-23-04, 04:15 AM | #4 | |||||||
El Padrino
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IP: 28AD 5545
streaming now....
beats aight..... some mozzart type ish....... flow.... typical thirdself style..... flow was dope.... quality..... improved over the last joint i peeped... lyrics.... they was straight..... you've come iller.... but the track was still flames....... imma take a second listen now..... ..... i think it was the beat that hindered you on this track...... concept was dope.... cant give negative feed.... cuz this wasnt a bad track..... i was feeling it.... i juss think it was the beat.... i know i wouldnt have been able to spit to this... but as much as anyone could, you did justice to it no doubt... overall 7.5 "ez"
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12-23-04, 03:27 PM | #5 | ||||||
Herb
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IP: 72D7 91CA
dope intro...dont like the vocal effect on the intro....theres no emotion in ya voice man...flow is mad stiff lyrics r far to simple ...get a thesaurus homie...ummmm production needs work use more similies more metas all that ish man...get a better mic..work on bringing more emotion to ya voice and delivery
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12-23-04, 03:33 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 2968 9CE2
let me see.....
Beat is aight......Vocals are way too loud.....flow is nice, Delivery needs some work don't seem like you really into it. It be a good idea to invest in a new mic, vocal quality is pretty low vocals should come down too. but besides that, track is pretty solid...nice drop.. peace |
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12-23-04, 03:58 PM | #7 | ||||||
20/20 VisioN
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IP: 1095 DF69
i like it, i dont like it when ppl have emotion in their tracks, sometimes its good and needed, but i think it just seems more real if u just spit and dont try to fake emotion, ya know. good song mayne. 7/10 fo sho.
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