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Old 12-22-04, 04:49 PM   #1
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New fiya joint from yourz truly holla back with the feedback
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Old 12-22-04, 05:30 PM   #2
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It's an alright track, I got that beat, quality was horrible. With more clarity I could tell you a little more, but I could barely understand it, good work though, stay up.

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Old 12-23-04, 01:31 AM   #3
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Fixed wrong version on it
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Old 12-23-04, 04:15 AM   #4
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streaming now....

beats aight..... some mozzart type ish.......

flow.... typical thirdself style..... flow was dope....

quality..... improved over the last joint i peeped...

lyrics.... they was straight..... you've come iller.... but the track was still flames.......

imma take a second listen now.....

..... i think it was the beat that hindered you on this track...... concept was dope.... cant give negative feed.... cuz this wasnt a bad track..... i was feeling it.... i juss think it was the beat.... i know i wouldnt have been able to spit to this... but as much as anyone could, you did justice to it no doubt...



overall 7.5

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Old 12-23-04, 03:27 PM   #5
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dope intro...dont like the vocal effect on the intro....theres no emotion in ya voice man...flow is mad stiff lyrics r far to simple ...get a thesaurus homie...ummmm production needs work use more similies more metas all that ish man...get a better mic..work on bringing more emotion to ya voice and delivery
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Old 12-23-04, 03:33 PM   #6
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let me see.....

Beat is aight......Vocals are way too loud.....flow is nice, Delivery needs some work don't seem like you really into it. It be a good idea to invest in a new mic, vocal quality is pretty low vocals should come down too.

but besides that, track is pretty solid...nice drop..

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Old 12-23-04, 03:58 PM   #7
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i like it, i dont like it when ppl have emotion in their tracks, sometimes its good and needed, but i think it just seems more real if u just spit and dont try to fake emotion, ya know. good song mayne. 7/10 fo sho.
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