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10-11-04, 12:12 PM | #2 | |||
Mona Lisa.
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Check.. Drop tonight if ya can
Just goin 12. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1661136 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1667100 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1669309
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10-13-04, 02:21 AM | #3 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Fuck battle this guys even to scared to fight people like me
I swear if you tell him "Head up." he justs gets up off his knees I aint a e-thug,thats shabba, so drive bi's aint whats my mission Every time hes late I ask, "How can the bus driver miss it?" gawd damn this aint bi, its a fag, really, please do believe He wants on his tomb stone "Head Cheif of the Fashion Police" In our last battle, i must admit, some of the shit you say is true Weakest Link, and im the weakest, and you know where it puts you Shit, I shouldve just gotten this win put in the fuckin header Its not that youre whack..........just everybody else is better Blah, fuck you lucky hoe, i didnt even drop too hard B.I.Detained just proves his favorite rhymes are about gay bars (if you dont get this shit youre an herb )
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10-13-04, 05:57 PM | #4 | |||
Mona Lisa.
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Aight..
..you wanna know wack? lemme give you a hunch 1st sign of this is when someone uses " ".. to try & illustrate a punch. A.I's been making many a cut.. skills been analysed for an elite crew, & shit..you ain't gone n0ne..only reason ya still in is b/coz on aim your coo'. Fuck the niceties, I ain't gonna be-friend this fucking gay Your sig' is true, coz after my verse.. 'this IS your last day'. Honestly son you're nothing.. your text experience is nuttin but dull when your biggest achievement on RV.. was a fucking little spat with Spul. Pathetic bitch.. it didn't take long for you to be dragged thru dirt, & yea I'm stomping on Soc's heels.. plus his stockings & his skirt. You know what best for this site Soc?.. I'll tell you if ya wanna? Take your faggot hand.. adjust the mouse.. then click the X in the corner.
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10-13-04, 08:06 PM | #5 | ||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 8161 9C86
Socrates...
Fuck battle this guys even to scared to fight people like me I swear if you tell him "Head up." he justs gets up off his knees nah played. I aint a e-thug,thats shabba, so drive bi's aint whats my mission Every time hes late I ask, "How can the bus driver miss it?" weak setup as well as the punch gawd damn this aint bi, its a fag, really, please do believe He wants on his tomb stone "Head Cheif of the Fashion Police" ok...could of been better In our last battle, i must admit, some of the shit you say is true Weakest Link, and im the weakest, and you know where it puts you seen something similar to this before. Shit, I shouldve just gotten this win put in the fuckin header Its not that youre whack..........just everybody else is better old...still a chuckle. Blah, fuck you lucky hoe, i didnt even drop too hard B.I.Detained just proves his favorite rhymes are about gay bars nope. B.I.Detained... ..you wanna know wack? lemme give you a hunch 1st sign of this is when someone uses " ".. to try & illustrate a punch. heh. A.I's been making many a cut.. skills been analysed for an elite crew, & shit..you ain't gone n0ne..only reason ya still in is b/coz on aim your coo'. ha Fuck the niceties, I ain't gonna be-friend this fucking gay Your sig' is true, coz after my verse.. 'this IS your last day'. not hard. Honestly son you're nothing.. your text experience is nuttin but dull when your biggest achievement on RV.. was a fucking little spat with Spul. lol...ok Pathetic bitch.. it didn't take long for you to be dragged thru dirt, & yea I'm stomping on Soc's heels.. plus his stockings & his skirt. LMAO...i used a similar line before.. You know what best for this site Soc?.. I'll tell you if ya wanna? Take your faggot hand.. adjust the mouse.. then click the X in the corner. decent closer well this battle is pretty much ones sided in my opinion...Brix wins for having harder punches and a more complex verse, Soc you had a bunch of old concepts and played punches that i just wasin feelin at all..though you did have 1 or 2 that gave me a little chuckle you could use some work. Brix wins for an overall better verse. V/ Brix return the favor and vote on my battle as well. pz |
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10-13-04, 08:45 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: D5FE 7245
Aight..
..you wanna know wack? lemme give you a hunch 1st sign of this is when someone uses " ".. to try & illustrate a punch. hmm, wasnt really feelin it, it was good but idk jus didnt hit, was kinda corn A.I's been making many a cut.. skills been analysed for an elite crew, & shit..you ain't gone n0ne..only reason ya still in is b/coz on aim your coo'. nope, wasnt feelin it,could have been better used some new words and described it more complex Fuck the niceties, I ain't gonna be-friend this fucking gay Your sig' is true, coz after my verse.. 'this IS your last day'. eh,wasnt complex felt kinda elementary wen i read it first time no hate but ok for the personal Honestly son you're nothing.. your text experience is nuttin but dull when your biggest achievement on RV.. was a fucking little spat with Spul. ok good personal and punch Pathetic bitch.. it didn't take long for you to be dragged thru dirt, & yea I'm stomping on Soc's heels.. plus his stockings & his skirt. played...ive heard a lot of lines like this, it just gets annoying wen i see another no hate You know what best for this site Soc?.. I'll tell you if ya wanna? Take your faggot hand.. adjust the mouse.. then click the X in the corner nice closer Fuck battle this guys even to scared to fight people like me I swear if you tell him "Head up." he justs gets up off his knees eh...ok I aint a e-thug,thats shabba, so drive bi's aint whats my mission Every time hes late I ask, "How can the bus driver miss it?" ok...gettin better gawd damn this aint bi, its a fag, really, please do believe He wants on his tomb stone "Head Cheif of the Fashion Police" nice punch and setp In our last battle, i must admit, some of the shit you say is true Weakest Link, and im the weakest, and you know where it puts you another good punch and setup using wat he said against him Shit, I shouldve just gotten this win put in the fuckin header Its not that youre whack..........just everybody else is better heard these kinds of lines before just words r switched around but like efusive said its not that played to the point where people hate it, so good one here Blah, fuck you lucky hoe, i didnt even drop too hard B.I.Detained just proves his favorite rhymes are about gay bars ok..an ok closer could it could have tied in with the fashion police theres my punch by punch analysis then...no hate on you B.I. it was honest vote i just felt socrates had more complex and enjoyable punches, yours felt kinda below him a little good battle to both good luck peace |
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10-13-04, 08:54 PM | #7 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 28AD 5545
B.I Detained:
..you wanna know wack? lemme give you a hunch 1st sign of this is when someone uses " ".. to try & illustrate a punch. ^^ decent opener could have been better 6/10 A.I's been making many a cut.. skills been analysed for an elite crew, & shit..you ain't gone n0ne..only reason ya still in is b/coz on aim your coo'. ^^just wack 2/10 Fuck the niceties, I ain't gonna be-friend this fucking gay Your sig' is true, coz after my verse.. 'this IS your last day'. ^^decent personal ok punch 7/10 Honestly son you're nothing.. your text experience is nuttin but dull when your biggest achievement on RV.. was a fucking little spat with Spul. ^^ehh alright 5/10 Pathetic bitch.. it didn't take long for you to be dragged thru dirt, & yea I'm stomping on Soc's heels.. plus his stockings & his skirt. ^^nice punch 8/10 You know what best for this site Soc?.. I'll tell you if ya wanna? Take your faggot hand.. adjust the mouse.. then click the X in the corner. ^^played concept 6/10 overall : 34/60 Socrates: Fuck battle this guys even to scared to fight people like me I swear if you tell him "Head up." he justs gets up off his knees ^^lol good shit nice opener 8/10 I aint a e-thug,thats shabba, so drive bi's aint whats my mission Every time hes late I ask, "How can the bus driver miss it?" ^^kinda weak wasnt feelin it 5/10 gawd damn this aint bi, its a fag, really, please do believe He wants on his tomb stone "Head Cheif of the Fashion Police" ^^that flowed really good and a decent punch 7/10 In our last battle, i must admit, some of the shit you say is true Weakest Link, and im the weakest, and you know where it puts you ^^hottest bar of this battle 9/10 Shit, I shouldve just gotten this win put in the fuckin header Its not that youre whack..........just everybody else is better ^^played concept 3/10 Blah, fuck you lucky hoe, i didnt even drop too hard B.I.Detained just proves his favorite rhymes are about gay bars ^^good closer 6/10 overall : 39/60 vote: socrates it was kinda obvious he came harder b.i it didnt look like you put much effort into this battle and underestimated your opponent ~!1!~
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10-14-04, 05:15 AM | #8 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: 9FA1 B27A
v/ BI.. it was just better.. if you want a break down tell me.. but i really cant be bothered.
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10-14-04, 11:26 AM | #9 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 10C3 AE8A
V/ B.I.
Punches- Tie Personals- B.I. Creativity- B.I. Enjoyment/ Comedy- Socrates.. Complex- B.I. Vote- B.I. just felt he had a more complex verse..with harder hitting personals and punches were really even.. g'd battle to both.
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10-16-04, 05:45 PM | #10 | |||||||
InSaNe KiLlAh
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IP: 9CA0 C805
B.I. Detained - 4
Socrates - 2 I accidentally deleted the Rick guys vote while cleaning...same score even if it doesn't show it....Up & Over Closed Battles... |
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10-16-04, 10:42 PM | #11 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
phantom
hmmm i dunno man u had some pointless and herbish lines dawg,u had acouple decent or potential ok lines in there,but mostly were way way mad played yo,it sounded like u were being rushed through that verse man....but yeah ok b.i detained man u had a nice structure,ur flow was good,i was likin the punches man very nice shit,u came creative in this verse...nuff said this battle was yours from the get go v/b.i. detained
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10-16-04, 11:36 PM | #12 | |
IP: C38B B51C
B.I. Detained - 5
Socrates - 2 You guys gotta edit with your votes or the scores will be B.I. Detained - 3 Socrates - -2
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10-17-04, 01:00 AM | #13 | |||||
Blow Me
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IP: 7D7A FF3D
v/bi detianed.. better verse.. good batle tho..
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10-17-04, 04:18 AM | #14 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: 258C A279
vote = b.i.
came harder in punches but overall had a good structure and hard punches |
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10-18-04, 08:13 AM | #15 | |||||||
InSaNe KiLlAh
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IP: 9CA0 C805
B.I. Detained wins by TKO (3-0) due to no links from Socrates, closed.
B.I. Detained +5 pts. Socrates -5 pts.
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