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Ameen 3 37.50%
illiance 5 62.50%
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Old 07-08-04, 02:29 PM   #1
illiance
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From: Bristol, Uk.
illiance VS Ameen

IP: 34D4 7406

Aight...

10 lines.

Drop in 20 mins.

No bullshit.

Peace.
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Never "no-showing" like "Melodic Methods" members in gay clubs..." - (illiance - 3 Quest - 0)

"Glisten tracks, deliver raps you make a livin' dissin' cats,
Face it - you ain't got balls, an' you only "flow" through "pissin' flaps..." (Illiance vs Kesha (No Show, Hoe))


Wins: 6 Lost: 3 -Blunts Battle League
 
Old 07-08-04, 02:41 PM   #2
Ameen
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Yo, better make it known, these MC's that i'm KILLIN//
Coz people need my ryhmes like diabetics need INCILLIN//
You must have epilepsy, b-coz you throwin a FIT//
It must be my verbal style and my natural WIT//
My ryhmes speak for me, i get chicks all over this LAND//
The only 'ILLIANCE' you be makin, is with your RIGHT~HAND//
Beat a battler once, then he's scraed to INCREASE~HIS~TONE//
I take my Lyriks-of-Wisdom" and tell them to FETCH~THA~BONE//
People shut there doors, whenever i COME~TO~ROAM//
I tear apart your lyrics, you gunna need them FIXED~N~SEWN//

please vote on the battles in my sig.....peace
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Old 07-08-04, 02:50 PM   #3
illiance
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I've made a good "deal" yo I'm gonna "make a killin,"
You out-your-depth like a vietnameese amputee swimmin',
You battle me you willin' to pay I'm burn-ya-balls,
Throw a cheque out tha window but you'll never drop a "personal",
You just can't see me like Gorilla's-in-the-mist,
And your punches are jus' soft like you got pillows-on-your-fists,
Yo I don't mind gay's you won't "beat me" despite your best,
Your like Mr.Muscle - no skills or talent jus a lycra vest,
My rhymes get up inside ya, irrate jus like a splinter,
You can't beat this, unlike your dad's cock - you've jus never had it in ya!

done...
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"Phenomonal skill belongin' to Ill I spray thugs,
Never "no-showing" like "Melodic Methods" members in gay clubs..." - (illiance - 3 Quest - 0)

"Glisten tracks, deliver raps you make a livin' dissin' cats,
Face it - you ain't got balls, an' you only "flow" through "pissin' flaps..." (Illiance vs Kesha (No Show, Hoe))


Wins: 6 Lost: 3 -Blunts Battle League
 
Old 07-08-04, 03:29 PM   #4
illiance
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so...drop any feedback and links and i'll vote back on urs.

peace
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"Phenomonal skill belongin' to Ill I spray thugs,
Never "no-showing" like "Melodic Methods" members in gay clubs..." - (illiance - 3 Quest - 0)

"Glisten tracks, deliver raps you make a livin' dissin' cats,
Face it - you ain't got balls, an' you only "flow" through "pissin' flaps..." (Illiance vs Kesha (No Show, Hoe))


Wins: 6 Lost: 3 -Blunts Battle League
 
Old 07-08-04, 03:30 PM   #5
Ameen
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ye same here......if you vote on this, i'll vote on yours

thanx
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Old 07-08-04, 03:59 PM   #6
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Vote=Ameen

Had good flow,structure,& decent punches.Illiance ok structure,and ok flow,but your punches could have been harder.They just wasn't hard as Ameen.

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Old 07-08-04, 04:11 PM   #7
mistah_tate
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this was a real close one, but i think my vote goes to illiance, in all he just came harder and had better rhymes, he seemed like he was more into it.
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Old 07-08-04, 04:21 PM   #8
BrOtHa-HoOd
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vote - illiance

i felt that he had the better punches n the better personals flow n structure

but like i always say the winna is tha 1 who elevates

drop a vote on this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335
 
Old 07-08-04, 06:16 PM   #9
illiance
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.................................................. .uppin
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"Phenomonal skill belongin' to Ill I spray thugs,
Never "no-showing" like "Melodic Methods" members in gay clubs..." - (illiance - 3 Quest - 0)

"Glisten tracks, deliver raps you make a livin' dissin' cats,
Face it - you ain't got balls, an' you only "flow" through "pissin' flaps..." (Illiance vs Kesha (No Show, Hoe))


Wins: 6 Lost: 3 -Blunts Battle League
 
Old 07-09-04, 01:55 PM   #10
-Strype-
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Opener - Illiance (both could've been better)
Closer - Illiance (hit harder)
Structure - Ameen
Flow - Ameen
Punches - Illiance
Metas - Illiance
Personals - None

OVERALL - Illiance

Decent battle.. though Illiance definately threw more and harder punches.. Ameen you've got nice flow and structure, just work on gettin' it to hit harder.. Much respect..

one~

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Old 07-09-04, 11:49 PM   #11
G-Suz
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illliance took this one... but ameen werent a bad flow.. he got it going on but ya missed out on tha punches
 
Old 07-10-04, 12:09 AM   #12
G
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Ameen won this one....He had a better structure and his rhymes were going together much better. I liked his flow and he had that one personal about ill's right hand. Had me weak....

Vote - Ameen

Vote on these:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134177

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111
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Old 07-10-04, 06:05 PM   #13
eB
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Would Have Liked To See SOme More Personals..Didn't See Any.

Ameen - Nice Flow Man i Like Your Structure And Kept Up Some Pretty Good Punches.
Nice Alliance With The Hand HaHa Kinda Played Out THough.

Illiance- Ok Flow A Little Weak On The Rhymes And Structure. A Few Good Metas.


Vote - Ameen

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134161


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Old 07-10-04, 06:10 PM   #14
Malefic
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Good battle first off.

Illiance
Nice punches. Great metiphores' along witta few good personal's.
Overall you had a pretty nice verse. Not much to improve on really.
Just keep up the ahrd punches.
Ameen
Also. Nice drop. Not a big fan of Cap'in your punches. We get the point. Your punches were OK. The one thing I noticed is your Metiphores. They were good. However they seeme'd a little bit forced at time. Good originalty just work on making things flo a little better into each other. Again, good Job.
This was a close on but...
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Old 07-10-04, 06:14 PM   #15
femcee
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not even a close battle... whats wrong with you ppl ?


ameen:

punches:3
personals:0
creativity:3
structure:2
vocab:3
flow:2

illiance:

punches:7
personals:5
creativity:7
structure:6
vocab:7
flow:6

clearly not a close battle,

vote: illiance, better flow, struct... erything, ameen just came wack

illiance i feel sorry for you, those ppl voting for the person who was clearly wack, instead of you, good luck

vote: illiance

return the favor, battle is in my sig, hit it up
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