aight 10 line shortie
no cheating
no hate or d/r
no feeding
no crew
verses due by 12 tomoro in the afternoon
good luck

aight cheking in i think im gona drop tomoro aight pc

DELEON the rookie of the month wow im honored to be in your battle...
nah your jus another MEXICAN im gona slaughter like cattle...
wen i first saw you on rapbattle i thought wow mexico to cali im suprised you made it that far...
hey rookie you wana hear a joke how many mexicans can fit in one car?haha...
i dont know the answer but i figured it'd be a worthy question to ask...
heres another question, i need to know when the hell your gona cut my damn grass...
you'd be amazed to see that i wear shoes called sean carter...
but you cant wear white sneackers cause to clean them you need some clean water...
the only time you were famous was when they caught your family sneaking over on some boats...
and you begged tha coastgaurd to let you stay jus like youll have to BEG for some votes...

haha aight all one huge personal on u bein a mexican or latino or w/e but ur verse is due my 12 pm if its not its an automatic dq good luck

Ima crash your lines like the market, so you shouldn't invest in stocks....
Fuck spittin, I'll throw you your own verse . . . then you'll really catch a loss....
In battles I'm quick to takeover ya grounds like FBI house raids....
This battles an E-Z-Bake Oven, cause me roasting your rhymes is childs play....
Like Forgettn Yeast While Bakin...Your Never Gettn Ya Cake Up....
The Only Powder Your Touchin Is Make up...So Like Dry Sex Your crews just a bunch of Fake Fucks .....
He post in threads like hes trying to prove, he’s all strong and tough....
Claimin he wanna be down , hell I thought you been there long enough....
Its worth a try, cause honestly, Truth, you horridly suck....
And ya posts are like ya nightlife, nobody gives a fuck....

aight lets get some votes in here.....

A'ight this was a nice battle...but DeLeon took it wut better overall punches. Both structures was a lil' stretched...Don's was more.

Don came wit some nice punches...flow was a lil' off 'cause like I said the structure...no real multies...a'ight verse I guess...just werk on some structure, and I didn' see any proof of ya Mexican personals. Overall, a'ight.

6/10

DeLeon...you came hard in this battle...every personal was dope...opener was hot...flow was a bit off, cause again, structure. One or two multies...tite. Punches was hittin hard as hell...nice dawg.

8/10

Vote- DeLeon

No hate. Hit these up honestly. Thanks.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130043

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130054

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yo u two used to be ion a crew if u still r that vote cant count sorry

aight well limited edition didnt like me or my crew as it was but ill let it stay if u want proof on him bein mexican heres the link
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...22&postcount=48

^^^A'ight I see your proof...but it doesn't matter. DeLeon still had a better verse. I have no beef wit you, or your crew, unless you want it. DeLeon is in Authentik Intelligence, and I am tha leader of Ill IntentionZ. We have never been in tha same crew before. Vote stays wit DeLeon.

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Some 1 Needs a dumby Smack * Cough " Don " Cough *

I think DeLeon so his more Elavated side u can't use only Jokes is that Good or something...no its not don u need to Elavate much more till you can battle people Like this Ur STructure was FUCKED man ur personals Where Weak even tho thats all u Stayed wit it was WAck..I Think DeLeon Got this Vote Cuz Elavated Punchs Personals and every thing Overall BEtter

V/DeLeon

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DOn-You didnt come to alright...Nothing there
was on point as it should be, You had alright structure
but not that good of punches and lacked in balance..Keep elevating

Deleon-You had everything like punches and similies
Metaphores also plus your structure was decent
you took this by all of those

v/Deleon

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uppin for some more votes......

lol dayum deleon got this one..don you had a good spit..but Deleon jus over powered you in ever categorie...deleon nice spit dawg that shit was sickness..>Don your shit was pretty nice but you should of used more wordplay and should of had better punches and personals

Deleon: you had sick persnoals..they really hit hard 8/10
punches..your punches were hittin hood too 7/10
wordplay: shit was pretty sick..not too confusin not too basic 7/10
multi's: saw a couple..and the ones is aw were nice 6.5/10
structure and flow: that shit was right on point..good shit 9/10

DON: personals were aiight...good of been better 5.5/10
punches: your punches were good i was feelin dem 6.5/10
flow and structure: your flow was aiight..and your strcture wasnt that good
multi's: they werent that good..good of been much better 5/10
wordplaY: most your shit was prety basic

vote Deleon

can u vote on this battle yall http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129919

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