i need some help wit my rhymes. i'm new so they suck


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slob on my knob like corn on
the cob, check in with me
and do ya job

Read up on other peoples stuff, DON'T BITE haha but just get the feel of it, the best way to learn is practise man so just keep on writing and writing and writing and writing...Stick at it and you'll get the hang of it...

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ur a failure.

you gotta write the shit by ya self...thats the only way you would be able to get the feel that you lookin for in a song...nobody else could write lyrics to they own music better than you

don't call that dam boy a failure you a failure

LMAO....

go get some dick you worthless bitch.

Dawg, just practice. Like cuz said up there, just listen to other ppl shitt just to get a feel.

Out

download some instrumentals, and start freestylin. Force yourself to freestyle about different subjects. I like to get someone to say words while im freestylin and I have to use the word that they said. It's a really good excercise. Always practice OUT LOUD. It does no good to do it in your head.

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Yeah the only way is doing it over and over and over... just battle all the time that helps... and just write till your fingers fall off... Ohp pick complex words out of the dictioarty and learn the meaning and try to find creative ways to flip the words around to make storys with the meanings... Peace... Oh if you need some beats email me I produce for a living peace