yo bitch normal rules, 5-15 lines, 15 mins to write.

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well what are ya sayin son?
ready for the duel? cause i got a loaded gun/
the only reason i'm here is for fun,
i wanna shoot you in the chest and see your lung/
see, me i'm elevating, while your still debatin,
"oh what should i do, i cant vote cause i be hate'in"/
i got the erge, i'm gonna "purge" your lines,
even tho they dont have a "serge" like mine/
your wack, go smoke some more herb,
the only reason you want a girl is for "joint' custody/
you lil nerd, if anyone shows you up it must be me,
i gotta make you see, and like everyone else, u'll hate me/
pfft, u a light weight?, yeh right,
i just may, i just might, pick a fight, and bring this to a new height/
i'll put it in "contrast" i'll give you an explanation you might grasp
i'm gonna make you "gasp" cause i'll put you in a body cast/
i'll rap like you, i'll beat your ass with a phone,
and i condone, i'll beat your ass all alone/
bitch you aint got nottin on me,
i send out punches harder than bruce lee/
now go back under your rock and hide,
you wont know a thing, it will be quick with scionide/

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you aint takein this shit MC..............
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and dont talk about foot ball you tool........

grabs the mic

grab the loaded gun, make this shit fun/
i don't care what u say son, drop u down worse then a football player makin a pun//-1
even a foot ball player can make a better rhyme, he'll even say the this rhyme is mine/
even he'll pay you a dime, to stop rappin and wastin ur time//-2
cuz foot ball be a sport, even a guy like you and as short/
can play in a fort, cuz ya can't play football in a port//-3
foot ball ain't n e thing like RB.com, cuz u don't have that ball in ur pome/
cuz that foot ball player even wants ur mom, cum in side of her like droppin a bomb//-4
he not a fag like you, fucks ur mom then hes through/
then u have a new bro when ur momma be due, ya better watch out cuz he'll fuck you too//-5

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yo dis shit might be close, ladies, and gents, start your voteing....................
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aight u were right...this is close..............

man i liked both verses:

flow: both
creativity: real
punches: real
structure: none

so i vote for: real....

look at this please:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81852

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78934

peace!

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pine-cone.. u might have structure but ur punches are weakkkkk

^ ahh it feels good to say that

see what i look 4 is punches and multis..

looks like the real mc iz winnin

vote= the real mc

~DIMEZ~

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yeh whateva, all he did was turn my shit around then talk about football........ but its your oppinion i guess.................. vote people........ uppin..................1.......................
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Real Took This Rather Easily
Pine Cone ? lol Love That Name
But Thats About All I Like Bout You
Real Had The Punches On Lock

Vote - Real

I Polled Yours So Do The Same

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1969#post831969

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