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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-05-05 at 02:06 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-05 01:36 PM.

Warrior battlen me it's showtime
KO this kid like Ali in his prime
how u feel..........a newbie is gunna beat ur ass
ur like school on saturday no class
this kids got nuthin on me
with his shitty ass rhymes im on my way to victory

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sumtin quick off the top of my head..................

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warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-05 01:55 PM.

Ima Rip this person apart. My bars is hurtin his heart.
Make his rap career hit the ‘campus man merkins an 'art.
We all knew from the start that ima damage ya son.
U read my verse and start holdin ya chest like sanford and son.
Makin ryda cry cause this site defines ya life.
Make it where RV don’t gotta listen to ruff ryders to hear ryda died.(ride or die)

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lol its obviously been a while aight here i go



Ima Rip this person apart. My bars is hurtin his heart.
Make his rap career hit the ‘campus man merkins an 'art.
We all knew from the start that ima damage ya son.
U read my verse and start holdin ya chest like sanford and son.
Makin ryda cry cause this site defines ya life.
Make it where RV don’t gotta listen to ruff ryders to hear ryda died.(ride or die)

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Voted For: warrior

This battle was one sided as hell.

Ryda came with pretty played wordplay (Ali/KO, school) and his other line was just a blatant statement that didn't connect at all. None of his bars really came close to doing anything, his rhyme scheme was simple as hell, his flow was unstable, and his overall verse just wasn't that good.

Warrior didn't come that good either, but at least he attempted wordplay and punches throughout his verse. His first bar about art could have been worded way better, but the concept had potential. Same with the last bar, the wordplay was a little forced, but the concept was there. The second bar had wordplay in it, but the punch didn't connect. Overall, he just had a way better verse.

Vote - Warrior

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Voted For: warrior

Nothing

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Ima Rip this person apart. My bars is hurtin his heart.
Make his rap career hit the ‘campus man merkins an 'art.
We all knew from the start that ima damage ya son.
U read my verse and start holdin ya chest like sanford and son.
Makin ryda cry cause this site defines ya life.
Make it where RV don’t gotta listen to ruff ryders to hear ryda died.(ride or die)


Owned here mate no hate, you need to work on your struct and get some decent concepts, warrior cam ill with personals.

no hate,

rtf in sig please.

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Voted For: warrior

u rhymed same word twice, thats a no no

but better flow, and punches v/warrior

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Voted For: Ryda

man both of you are fucking wack man!! i dont see how u guys even got a vote!! who the fuck would vote for u lame fuckers!!!.... just elevate............. if u wanna spit back at me then drop a message on my shit and well battle!...peace...Infinite_Stan

Voted For: warrior

you did a lot better, so you win.............................

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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