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Old 05-16-03, 11:07 AM   #1
MeNTiLL
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~life~

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Tha first thing that comes to my mind when I think about life->
Blah->
It's overrated, I know Im not tha first to say it but fucc it->
FUCC IT!!!! wit every ounce of breath that's left in me->
Don't tell me to be friendly->
Unless ur willin' to befriend me wit a bond that's never ending->
Im tired of tha mind bending criticism->
Hated on cuz I spit my wisdom and opress tha system->
Of so called unity->
We're disputingly trapped on equality and police still think 'bout shooting me->
Cuz I was given tha oppurtunity to be a lesser image->
Black on both sides even my mind Satan's influencin' me to scrimmage->
And exceed tha limit that's given->
All of this got me near tha point where Im tired of livin'->
But who isn't? I know Im not tha only one who's sick of this SHIT!!!!!!->
Fucc it, Im down ramblin' off tha mouth tha wordz of my thoughtz, Im hittin' SUBMIT->


Blah...Juss felt like puttin' up a piece in this forum cuz I haven't done it in a while...It might be wack but fucc it I did it in like 5 minutes...Peace
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Old 05-17-03, 05:58 PM   #2
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I don't really agree with your attitude on life but you wrote about this pretty well. It was a good post for 5 minutes worth of work.
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