Battle could have been better

Lyrical.........weak verse man real newbish, your punches were undeveloped setup completely wrong an your punches were weak, you had no personals at all, your vocab was really basic, you lacked any real multies, your flow was a lil off, structure was best part of verse an even that was just ok, you really need to elevate.

Mixxed.........Your was a little more of an experienced verse but could still have been better, you had alot of multie use which was good but doesn't replace real hard punches, you had a few punches that connnected, an like one personal which was weak but it connected, vocab use was pretty good, an decent wordplay, your lines were really strecthed though, gotta tighten up your structure, flow coulda been better, but you had the better verse so you won.
Vote: Mixxed MC

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yo missed why you lie you told me 10 BARS MAN i had so much moew i could have wrote down but i stuck 2 da rules

This was a decent battle...there were some standout lines. I would have liked to have seen a more evenly matched structure. BUt, it was okay the way it was.

Here's the breakdown


Opener: Lyrical
Flow: Lyrical
Rhymes: Tie
Disses: Lyrical
Punches: Mixxed
Structure: None
Vocab: Mixxed
Wordplay: Mixxed
Metas: Mixxed
Closer: None...Lyricals was gay...Mixx was weak

Overall: Vote/Mixxed...but barely

its 8 bars dumb ass i didint say LINES i have 8BArS

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Free Agent

Dat was a good battle

*Breakdown*

-Lyrical Demon-

Flow- 5/10
Structure- 7/10
Punches- 6/10
Rhymes- 6/10
Total- 24/40
u started off iight but den u fell off i dont have nuttin to really say...

ya best line
Take a hint, find another hobby, stop dropping that crap...
G, ya couldn't make crowds pop if they were wearin bubble wrap...

-Mixxed MC 24-

Flow- 7/10
Structure- 7/10
Punches- 8/10
Rhymes- 9/10
Total- 31/40
Good rhymes, and punches u did good keep spittin...

ya best line
..:|:.. Ur a Blind Ass ho who cant battle good ..:|:..
..:|:.. Im str8 outta jersey if u was from Newark u still whouldint be hood ..:|:.. (Newark's the worst place in Jersey )

uppin 4 votes

i felt this battle was too damm short but from what ive seen i thin demon won this shit his little flow was good u cheated mixxed u said 8 bars your ass spit 8 million but it was good though but i think demon won i liked his flow

mixxed you cheated when you said 8 bars but hos flow was still better than yours i liked the elevate line really much i also like the wordplay in dis battle also i think that demon had no multies so he loss points for that

dis battle was garbage ive seen both of you have better battles than this
mixxed u better than dat and demon also but i guess i have to choose one of you so its gonna be the demon only becaues your punches were good not great but good
mixxed you should have beaten him but u took him lightly and her beat you

hey mixxed u beta watch out cuse he a d/r he uses another name to vote for himself he already did it aginst me and xtoxicverbs his nmae is unknown assassin he uses it to vote for himsel he did it aginst me and xtoxicverbs im trying to get his ass banned

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merked list: spiky2k8, da jazz, young jigga, hoping to beat many other membaz

1. tha gilla teen :whooped that nigga
2. spiky 2k8 (2) :thats was a funny battle
3. da jazz :easy ass win also funny battle
4. young jigga :fun battles althought i won easyly
5. youndkd33: that bitch was a whiner about lines oh well i still win

and i think big man cuse he votes on every single battle of lyrical demons

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merked list: spiky2k8, da jazz, young jigga, hoping to beat many other membaz

1. tha gilla teen :whooped that nigga
2. spiky 2k8 (2) :thats was a funny battle
3. da jazz :easy ass win also funny battle
4. young jigga :fun battles althought i won easyly
5. youndkd33: that bitch was a whiner about lines oh well i still win

Yo i TOld Strobe that niggas BULLSHITTIN


Got um thas how u won against Da MagicIan 7

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Free Agent

if anybody lost against lyrical demon den jus tell strobe because dat nigga got 4 user names and he votes for hisself...erybody tell strobe so dat nigga gets banned...i was wonderin y i lost...

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...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...