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song's called show n prove..props to oursin for mixing/editing

peepin.........

not feelin the beat intro.. but kicks in nice..drums are dope..voice is origanl...need to edit them breathes although the qaulity is good..undergrouind steez i enjoy commercial shuit but this is good man..good job

Your voice is interesting, You need to work on controlling your breaths so that there not so loud. Your lyrics were aight nothin great keep workin it good otherwise though.

aight..I'm straight wit that and I couldn't always understand what u were sayin' but it's hot shit anyway... keep up the good shit dawg!!!

shyt was ill PERIOD ayo DAR holla at me on AIM
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RicanChulo07

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It was aight
sounds like you got strep throat but it sounds diff which is good
flows aight off beat the odd time
aight overall
peace

this was a solid track... nice underground skeez. dope shit dawg.... yo check your pm for me

thnx -1-

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yeah song is pretty dope but i agree you really need to work on ya breathing so it doesnt sound so loud otherwise its pretty dope...sounds kinda like mc juice but more husky