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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
..Syck.. | 5 | 62.50% | |
Bruise Banter | 3 | 37.50% | |
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02-12-04, 06:43 PM | #16 | |
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: A4B6 D319
^ agreed......
both had nice punches...but syk's came across much harder, and i disagree with btk.... syk's wordplay was better than bruise.....both had good structures....metas were better from syk... ...bruise....that parady line just wasnt hard enuff.....good polevolting line liked that....butter knife line/carreer line...was ehh...okay...but i was losin your flow and i think the disses/punches fell off toward the end.... syck's mac truck line was nasty ....his closer was much better then bruises....the speak with line BTL says is played i havent herd to many versions of it....and overall syck's multies were to good...cuz they came with punches too....so i think he easily wins this battle even tho banner did drop nicely... and p.s. i doubt your newbs!
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02-12-04, 08:06 PM | #17 |
Flyweight
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IP: F596 9C85
up # 3................................... or 4.......................... one of em............ leave a link.................
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02-12-04, 10:44 PM | #18 |
Flyweight
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IP: F596 9C85
god damn will you fucks vote, yall put up battles and bitch about not getting votes then u sit there and dont wanna give to get.. i voted on like 10 battles and got one vote from one of them.. thats 9 assholes who expect to get votes when they aint giving any.. no wonder it takes a week and 10 ups to finish a battle
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02-12-04, 11:37 PM | #19 |
Flyweight
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IP: F596 9C85
guess this is my last up.. .................................................. ..............
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02-12-04, 11:54 PM | #20 | |
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IP: 54CE EF3B
Yeah I got to go with Born on this one....
Syck...no dount you got that hot shit...but it seemed like you didn't have that edge in the wordplay department....you had the flow dept...your shit was seamless almost..but you were a little simple and uncreative with the punches..compared to Banter anyway...he ahd a little more wit with his shit.. Bruise...i like the drop...agressive..wordplay was stupid..you came up with some good lines..especially the parody line..i think that your verse was a little more "Grown Up" the flow was the only thing you lacked in because syck came so clean but that's the only place that he really beat you in...your punches and your wordplay were a lot better....Good battle..I got a sneaking suspicion that you guy's got aliases. ( I may be wrong though...not really a newbish flow from either of you though.) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113614 |
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02-13-04, 01:17 AM | #21 | |
Flyweight
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IP: EF6F B9AC
i doubt either of you are newbs. Great battle good flow on both prats Structures where almost the same. I think that Sycks multies and punches where amazing nice shit man. Bruise you punches i didint think landed as hard and i though syck had a little more multies but your wordplay made up for that rilly nice, very orignial and creative verse.
Overall - Syck. sycks punches and multies overall took this one. great battle very close one.
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02-13-04, 04:27 AM | #22 |
New to RB
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02-13-04, 01:42 PM | #23 |
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02-13-04, 02:02 PM | #24 | |
Not ya Average
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Syck i think pulled this one out i wuz feelin it puches seen to hit right, dont know bout ur structure too much but just keep elevatin.........good shit dowg
bruise ur shit wuz good too just i think u had some played lines for the most part...no hate elevate vote= syck
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02-13-04, 03:32 PM | #25 | |
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yea here ya go i'll break it down....as far as wittiness is concerned syck came better alot of good met4's and wordplay throughout his verse.....alot to work on still though syck your punches didn't hit as hard as you would like them to......the best ones you had were....the bruise faded line and the death in the family line......make your punches short and sweet and that will help them be more affective also make sure you look at what your saying in your punch.....like i leave this kid stuck in the face ...cause he's a disgrace....all you really did was call him a disgrace.....thats not so hardcore despite the line b4 it....
Bruise you have the right idea just need to work on sculpting your style a bit...you said it yourself that you came a little weak which is good so that means you know what weak is....I recommend walkin around in your day to day life and thinking in metaphors and punches it really helps ...overall good battle ..vote syck pz. |
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