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Reflekt | 5 | 100.00% | |
.Daillestinjerz. | 0 | 0% | |
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08-11-05, 02:27 PM | #1 |
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Reflekt vs .Daillestinjerz.
IP: DACE 6461
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08-11-05, 02:36 PM | #2 | |
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.Daillestinjerz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 02:36 PM.
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08-11-05, 02:56 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 2029 97B3
Reflekt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 02:56 PM.
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08-11-05, 02:59 PM | #4 |
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Loud mouth muffucker im here to stop these lames,
if u a gangsta muffucker im bout to check u like a hockey game Its no love bitch yea im disrespectin ya ass, u prolly had a shitty child hood i cud tell cuz ur rymes r REFLEKTIN ur past. This kids a young buck, let alone a dumb fuck, and u garbage muffucker soo u get taken out in a dump truck If the call gets made to take u out im tha shooter, cuz my gunz constantly got hands on'em like tha mouse on a computer When we fight bitch dont worry bout wut im holdin on me, i guess battlin new jacks gets this kid feelin good like he rollin on E wen we done his eyes el b to swollen to see, he wants to b a rapper but a bitch is wut hes goin to be.
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08-11-05, 03:06 PM | #5 |
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IP: 2029 97B3
you standing in my way..the only thing thats tryna hinder
me..so when im done my lyrics leave .da illest injer(injured) your 10 posts that you did is the closest you'll ever come to being perfect cause dudes punches are slow to connect like dial-up service gettin pm's from u sayin check in..ho gimme a second wanna test this?..but you only fire blanks like ya record* man you nothing to me..you might got 50 cents..but thats only a lil bit the only things to come outta jersey are big headed lil kidd's** im like a mc doctor if ya peep the way my lyrics tear through your anatomy your verse is nothing but littered with more filler than a mouth infested with cavities now when da illest jumps off stage is the only time they ever turn you up why bother with new jersey?..when miami already burned you up*** *his record is 0-0 **big head lil kidd's..jason kidd is from the new jersey nets ***Miami beat NJ in the NBA playoffs |
08-11-05, 03:24 PM | #6 |
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IP: 9D5A BF38
Voted For: Reflekt
you standing in my way..the only thing thats tryna hinder me..so when im done my lyrics leave .da illest injer(injured) ^^weak wordplay here...5/10 your 10 posts that you did is the closest you'll ever come to being perfect cause dudes punches are slow to connect like dial-up service ^^Played as fuck....2/10 gettin pm's from u sayin check in..ho gimme a second wanna test this?..but you only fire blanks like ya record* ^^Ok.......a lil uoriginal rip on record tho...5/10 man you nothing to me..you might got 50 cents..but thats only a lil bit the only things to come outta jersey are big headed lil kidd's** ^^1st line was good,2nd sucked...4/10 im like a mc doctor if ya peep the way my lyrics tear through your anatomy your verse is nothing but littered with more filler than a mouth infested with cavities ^^Basic.....3/10 now when da illest jumps off stage is the only time they ever turn you up why bother with new jersey?..when miami already burned you up*** ^^ok....4/10 Ight...mediocre verse here...shows you can use some elevation.I saw you make some attempts on wordplay with the 1st bar/injer....but it wasn't executed well.Had too many played lines..like the dial up one and cavities.Then there are the flat out basic lines like the record one.So just work on creativity,complexity,and wordplay.But at least all of your bars had punches. Loud mouth muffucker im here to stop these lames, if u a gangsta muffucker im bout to check u like a hockey game ^^Not much of a punch tho...0/10 Its no love bitch yea im disrespectin ya ass, u prolly had a shitty child hood i cud tell cuz ur rymes r REFLEKTIN ur past. ^^hmm...Ok..a personal at least...a generous 4/10 This kids a young buck, let alone a dumb fuck, and u garbage muffucker soo u get taken out in a dump truck ^^basic as fuck....1/10 If the call gets made to take u out im tha shooter, cuz my gunz constantly got hands on'em like tha mouse on a computer ^^Not much of a punch..good concept with hands/mouse...but you talking about your guns..as opposed to dissing...1/10 When we fight bitch dont worry bout wut im holdin on me, i guess battlin new jacks gets this kid feelin good like he rollin on E ^Flowed bad.....weak punch...3/10 wen we done his eyes el b to swollen to see, he wants to b a rapper but a bitch is wut hes goin to be. ^^basic as fuck Ok...bad verse man.Too basic.Every line,except the mouse one was basic.As for the mouse line..you coulda said his mother's ass always got hands on it like a mouse or something.You gotta make it diss.You can't go talkin about your guns and shit.And get complex with your rhymes. Vote-Reflekt RTF BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203538 |
08-11-05, 08:22 PM | #7 | |
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Voted For: Reflekt
Loud mouth muffucker im here to stop these lames, if u a gangsta muffucker im bout to check u like a hockey game ^weak opener...had bad flow to it 3/10^ Its no love bitch yea im disrespectin ya ass, u prolly had a shitty child hood i cud tell cuz ur rymes r REFLEKTIN ur past. ^Bad personal....didnt really hit hard at all 2/10^ This kids a young buck, let alone a dumb fuck, and u garbage muffucker soo u get taken out in a dump truck ^Basic rhyme scheme lack of wordplay 1/10^ If the call gets made to take u out im tha shooter, cuz my gunz constantly got hands on'em like tha mouse on a computer ^Not a bad reference....good comparison....good diss 5/10^ When we fight bitch dont worry bout wut im holdin on me, i guess battlin new jacks gets this kid feelin good like he rollin on E ^what? didnt make sence nor contributed to ur verse 1/10^ wen we done his eyes el b to swollen to see, he wants to b a rapper but a bitch is wut hes goin to be. ^Weak closer not good, easy rhyme scheme 2/10^ Over all ur structure is off point, try making ur lines end up at the same pont for better structure and better flow....ur rhyme scheme was basic...up on ur vocab to enhnace the flow/verse itself....and make sure ur verse has multis....so it also enhances ur verse you standing in my way..the only thing thats tryna hinder me..so when im done my lyrics leave .da illest injer(injured) ^Nice opener....4/10^ your 10 posts that you did is the closest you'll ever come to being perfect cause dudes punches are slow to connect like dial-up service ^very nice diss...hard hitting, liked it a lot 6/10^ gettin pm's from u sayin check in..ho gimme a second wanna test this?..but you only fire blanks like ya record* ^ok diss, was iight simple rhyme scheme 5/10^ man you nothing to me..you might got 50 cents..but thats only a lil bit the only things to come outta jersey are big headed lil kidd's** ^HAHA made me laugh nice punch right here 8/10^ im like a mc doctor if ya peep the way my lyrics tear through your anatomy your verse is nothing but littered with more filler than a mouth infested with cavities ^Good comparison nice job on this 5/10^ now when da illest jumps off stage is the only time they ever turn you up why bother with new jersey?..when miami already burned you up*** ^Good reference it hit hard and nice closer 6/10^ Over all, i liked this...but work on your structure to get each word end up at the same point at the end of one line, up on ur multis so it makes ur verse flow better and just be more enjoyable to read....ur vocab can be upped but it was ok in this becuz u had hard hitting punches V/REFLEKT RTF since i was kind to peep and analyze yours |
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08-11-05, 08:26 PM | #8 |
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This was feedback posted for Reflekt
IP: 0825 899A
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-12-05, 04:02 AM | #9 |
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IP: 2029 97B3
^who the heck are you? but thats cool. i know it was.
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08-24-05, 12:01 PM | #10 | |||
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IP: 57A9 6CCB
Voted For: Reflekt
damn...this was a nice battle...and a very close one yo... i looked at both competitors punches and i said...nah they both got that...personals were both decent...but then i tryed to consider both structures but i guess reflekt gets my vote for this...yeah both of u had gd irony and kept y'all punches hittin harder and harder...but reflekt's verse had more flow than daillest's...this was a nice battle tho and props to both...keep doin ur thang.. drop honest and well xplained votes on 1 of my battles cos i did the same here....thanx a lot
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08-31-05, 11:22 AM | #11 |
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This was feedback posted for Reflekt
IP: 6258 5D0D
pollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllsssssss
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10-24-05, 10:04 AM | #12 |
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02-15-06, 11:34 PM | #13 | |
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Voted For: Reflekt
lol Illest had one pretty good name play personal... but Reflekt had more and harder hitting ones... He just flat out hit harder in this battle... I gotta give em to em off the strength of that... that and they're were close in just about every other catagory... Opener: Reflekt Closer: Reflekt (even though it was a forced personal) Punches: Reflekt Personals: Reflekt Creativity: Refleft Complexity: Reflekt Vote: Reflekt
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02-19-06, 02:48 AM | #14 | |
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This was feedback posted for Reflekt
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Reflekt took this battle.. would vote, but I'm too lazy now.
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02-19-06, 02:54 AM | #15 | |
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IP: D695 B62A
Voted For: Reflekt
Loud mouth muffucker im here to stop these lames, if u a gangsta muffucker im bout to check u like a hockey game ^no Its no love bitch yea im disrespectin ya ass, u prolly had a shitty child hood i cud tell cuz ur rymes r REFLEKTIN ur past. ^no This kids a young buck, let alone a dumb fuck, and u garbage muffucker soo u get taken out in a dump truck ^uh no If the call gets made to take u out im tha shooter, cuz my gunz constantly got hands on'em like tha mouse on a computer ^nah When we fight bitch dont worry bout wut im holdin on me, i guess battlin new jacks gets this kid feelin good like he rollin on E ^no wen we done his eyes el b to swollen to see, he wants to b a rapper but a bitch is wut hes goin to be. ^uh no you standing in my way..the only thing thats tryna hinder me..so when im done my lyrics leave .da illest injer(injured) ^ok your 10 posts that you did is the closest you'll ever come to being perfect cause dudes punches are slow to connect like dial-up service ^good gettin pm's from u sayin check in..ho gimme a second wanna test this?..but you only fire blanks like ya record* ^nice man you nothing to me..you might got 50 cents..but thats only a lil bit the only things to come outta jersey are big headed lil kidd's** ^nah im like a mc doctor if ya peep the way my lyrics tear through your anatomy your verse is nothing but littered with more filler than a mouth infested with cavities ^good now when da illest jumps off stage is the only time they ever turn you up why bother with new jersey?..when miami already burned you up*** ^ok V/Reflekt |
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