dis battle wasnt all that..both verses were average...dis is a hard one to vote on

sureal verse wuz just a lil too plain, phrantik verse kinda plain too.. but if i had to...i have to go with phrantik, cuz of his touching lines........

vote: phrantik

Tik, your verse was powerful - it had emotions in it
it made me quite sad, content wise you may have edged
this battle.

Sureal, nice story - not as awe inspiring as Tik's but close.
flow was -average- i don't like the way you word things
but it was nice.

when i break it down...

Tik

Content 5/5
Flow 1/5*
Vocab 3/5
Imagery 4/5

Sureal

Content 4/5
Flow 4/5
Vocab 3.5
Imagery 4/5

Tik 13
Sureal 15


very nice battle. i was a little suprised.
but, Sureal takes this for one main
reason.

* Tik, your flow wasn't apparant at all
i know artists like sole don't rhyme
but...i couldn't find any rythm while
reading this, regardless of if it rhymes.


V. Sureal

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Sureal- I think you had pretty good rhymes and you had a good flow going on.

Phrantic- I would have liked to see more rhymes in there. I felt what you had goin a lot more

If this was based on flow or style Sureal would own....

But its not....

I felt tik and he gets my vote

6-5 for sureal.
but, not being a bitch,
i think 13th is hate voting.
even if he says he isnt
he probably is. the kid has never voted for me ever.
even if i did pull of a ko victory there as always one vote against..
13ths.

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Dawg, I Could Also Bitch About Your Last Two Votes..

Both Explained Like Shit, And Katz I Never Heard Of...

But W/e... 6-5. . . Uppin

Why must you guys do this to me, such great topicals. Tik, not like this matters, I liked your rhyme scheme, it was a little hard to find, but when I found it, it opened it up so much better. You kept where you were going with the story (as usual) in the dark until the very end. And I felt truly cheated out of an ending. I knew it was symbolic and all, and I am the definition of a romantic. Sureal, your ending was great, some parts were out of order, but I felt that you had the better Topical

Vote=Sureal

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