A'yo, propps to narc uzi....Layin down this RAW Ass hook....Teph on the flow, Droppin another O.M.......Old school days for y'all......Check....

Narc uzi [Hook:]
"Im Just Too RAW
But ya still think Im a Novice
Im Just Too RAW
Ill be numba One its a Promise
Im Just Too RAW
Fuck everyone im the best Regardles
Im Just too RAW
And Ya will all Agree on the 11th of August
That Im Just Too RAW"

Verse:
Couple niggas talkin, so teph gets to walkin, holdin triggers too the INC
Y'all nothin more than BITCHES, Like pakistani housewives chained to a SINK
you cook, suck, clean....while teph bucks an finger fucks ya whole team
Writin a quick sixteen, the mugs is mean, tha slugs greet your spleen
crack fiend, ya backs leaned, struttin witta hunch, punch? got awhole bunch
the way i serve this fist, its like ya' eatin a knuckle sandwich for lunch
each finger you munch, they crack ya teeth, the whole towns in disbelief
the way i took over this Peice is ludaCHRIS, call me a youngunna like neef
pussies stink like queef, leakin from ya clits while RAW got u havin mental fits
Tricks are pussy whipped!..your slaves, so like deodorizer ya''workin the PITS''
I'm merkin the trigs, each rhyme from these lines are repped in peoples sigs
Use Narc's Uzi to heat up ya wigs, so i'm turnin you into pork chops from Pigs
I'm gutter like Grids, Teph, the one n only Makin nigas wanna flip they lids
I'll have your existance erased quicker than sellin it on ebay with free bids
Look what i done did, ketd up a quick buck so with these shots You drop
....Your ass, so it goes down hot, I'm class so who the fuck want what?
Just stop....'do as i do...cause this is over, I'm thru, this is thoro defined
An if you aint feelin this, open ya eyes 'cause my presnce is not blind!

Narc uzi [Hook:]
"Im Just Too RAW
But ya still think Im a Novice
Im Just Too RAW
Ill be numba One its a Promise
Im Just Too RAW
Fuck everyone im the best Regardles
Im Just too RAW
And Ya will all Agree on the 11th of August
That Im Just Too RAW"


Uh-oh! teph back at it again...Its bad news!!!!

Narc, i see you homie, Propps on the hook, dope shit...had to key somthinm up when i saw it........RAW Is in the buildin!

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hook is cool i guess,

RAW=wack

lol jp the verse was alright the lines were to streched in my eye, the stucture was good flow was off, the vocab could be upped but for a key i think it was pretty good, the imagery was weak well this is a random om nothing spectacular or anything but its still pretty good man, keep it up, i'd like to see you try a om sometime.

rtf links in the sig

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Word, appreciate the feed, I'll rtf right now.....

so Indeph, the link you gonna ask me to drop is in the signature of dude above me ^^

Bumpin..

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This was hott right here my man, You had nice multis......uR structure was ok...but it flowed very good, nothing to complain about...up on ur vocab.. a bit....as u go along in ur verse apply bigger vocab so it will be more enjoyable to read...werd ........Keepin it RAW baby gutta luv it.......rtf if you would.....peace man....7.5/10

It was good....content was kinda boring.....but flow was crazy.....

Good shit teph that'll teach them not to say your name in a diss again

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