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Old 08-04-05, 12:03 AM   #1
Kid Chaos
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a rap ov course

IP: CBD1 4982

So continuein my rhymes ill say a nigga still da shit//
anyone of the nigga freestyles could be considered a hit//
So what do I say when you claim I can't spit?//
one thing is certain i sho as hell wont quit//
im back muhfuckas and i got sumtin to prove//
if we was beefin and i know where you stay then u betta move//
go clean across the country cus all you could do//
if this was a battle i couldve anihhilated any one of you// []D[][]\/[][]D

oh it ain ova....

whetha you dislike my rhymes or just my arrogant words//
whetha u jus don like me orr get disturbed by my verbs//
im bringin the pain, youngcarta bringin his ass back to the game//
no matta how much i change ill never be lame, im stayin the same//
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Old 08-04-05, 01:41 AM   #2
Sean Gunner
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One syllable rhyme scheme, nothing that creative, vocab was simple, overall this is just some plain and generic rap I can hear no matter where I go. Try thinking of more creative stuff.
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Old 08-04-05, 01:49 AM   #3
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