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08-04-05, 12:03 AM | #1 | |||||
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a rap ov course
IP: CBD1 4982
So continuein my rhymes ill say a nigga still da shit//
anyone of the nigga freestyles could be considered a hit// So what do I say when you claim I can't spit?// one thing is certain i sho as hell wont quit// im back muhfuckas and i got sumtin to prove// if we was beefin and i know where you stay then u betta move// go clean across the country cus all you could do// if this was a battle i couldve anihhilated any one of you// []D[][]\/[][]D oh it ain ova.... whetha you dislike my rhymes or just my arrogant words// whetha u jus don like me orr get disturbed by my verbs// im bringin the pain, youngcarta bringin his ass back to the game// no matta how much i change ill never be lame, im stayin the same// |
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08-04-05, 01:41 AM | #2 | ||||
GG Haterz
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IP: 2AFF F797
One syllable rhyme scheme, nothing that creative, vocab was simple, overall this is just some plain and generic rap I can hear no matter where I go. Try thinking of more creative stuff.
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08-04-05, 01:49 AM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Drop a link or this will be closed
*Moved to Freestyle*
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