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Old 01-06-06, 03:08 PM   #1
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blow u away

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yea yea... ok ok... here we go foolz!

once again im here as S to the Z, fool like u are just wanna b's
say something that might piss me off, go ahead and se ur motherfucking head twist off.
roll on the floor like a bowling ball, u say u got ballz so go ahead fool stand tall.
u scared cus ima blow u away. take u out like yesterdays news and throw u away.
u cant fuck with me and if u could, u wouldnt do it leagaly.
payin off the jury and cops so they can arrest me and charge me fees
haha well that aint gonna happen in this life time nor the next.
cus right now im gettin paid and in the next havin sex.
so when u feel ready to battle, go home and leave ur nine.
or u want me to help u when i put lipstick on ur forhead to make up ur mind.
this rhymes are coming fast, and there helpin me make u a thing of the past.
turnin u like a dead corpse. just dust and ash.
back away fool, b4 i blow u away. how many times to i have to tell u TODAY AINT UR DAY.
nor ur month not even ur year. ima stand tall and face any one with no fear.
ill take them, face em' kill em and replace them. i dont make the rules i just embrace them.
so like i said when u ready lets go. i could kill u now with a blink for all u know.
yea for all u know im right be hind u, or up in the sky with god ready to smight u.
hahaha dont look around cus u wont see me. im invisible to the naked eye cus im
S to the Z.

thats my flow for today... hope u like it.

S to the Z

(this is to no one if anyone is asking, i aint dissing no one... yet)
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Old 01-06-06, 03:21 PM   #2
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lol

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damn i been readin lyrics all day on this site,,,but srry man...that shit was wack lol
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Old 01-06-06, 03:24 PM   #3
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lol im just gettin start, well see wut some of the true members say. the pro's but i think it is alright
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Old 01-06-06, 03:37 PM   #4
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ya coo coo...ya im new here too..my first post was in tha cypher lol,,but no-1 is jumpin on that shit..? anyewayz ya stay up tho..1
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Old 01-06-06, 09:18 PM   #5
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this was aight, really nothin special. the flow was off, in my opinion and ur lines seem stretched. Plus u gotta add more multies with internal rhyming. Pls. hit up my freestyles or open mics aight. Links are in my sig. Stay up man peace.
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