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Old 07-09-02, 03:53 PM   #1
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It's Only me by

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I can lyrically piece graffiti along tha streets of each city//
Envision mentally and suspend the imminent development and the motions of seedlings,
Swimming around in my ovaries a whole new generation of mini me's
Breath holding contest against that only competition which is me
I defeat infinity ,

I'm a cancer patient that has asthma and with every breath I delete a century
Depetin that O (ozone layer) of tha globe enviromentally
Leavin ya heart skippin beats repeatedly with out tha inner me that' sadly and praticallyempty
attackin me is graphically ne as tha actual blasphemous spirit that my subconscious indecisively sliced from me physically to divide tha right energy preventin' Christ from his intervening intentions that futuristically sighted my injuries that was inevitably ment within a minute at least
I'm fighting me mentally
no fixin my teeth bitin u dentally
my brainwaves surfs tha earth's waves as my mind enters that sea adventurously
mighty is what I was sent sent to be colliding with the veil providing energy
Only I would be deciding to put an end to me
me disguising on halloween is hiding tha enemy or is it ?
It's inviting tha enemy
higly pricing essentials that are vital tha image that you highly regard and are wrongly guided by, but nowandays in society seems right is unstrikingly and unsuprisingly ideal but only striking itself so I srike wit stronger electricity , Ive already elected my ministry to do my sinsiterbiding of administering that riding of idiocy but hey it's only me
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Old 07-09-02, 04:34 PM   #2
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holy shit.....that was...wow...im in awe....i dont know what to say...keep it up!!!!!!

i look forward to reading more of your work!
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Old 07-09-02, 06:26 PM   #3
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hey....

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i mean this was good..kind of reminded me of an open mic piece.....next time i wanna see a piece tho with just RAW emotion...and remember not all poems gotta rhyme....it wasn't the best..but it was okay..much luv..God bless..1..
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Old 07-10-02, 08:59 AM   #4
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Thannx y'all

Da miss mack I'll be sure 2 do that


much luv
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Old 07-10-02, 03:10 PM   #5
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uppin
stop sleepin
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Old 07-11-02, 09:00 AM   #6
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good piece... it did remind me of an open mic more than a poem, but it still had emotions that needed to be expressed, and thats what poetry is all about... even though the flow was a bit shaky, the vocab was really good and u got ur message out.... nice job and keep it flowin
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Old 07-11-02, 09:13 AM   #7
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great piece yo!!! im really feeling this!

keep droppin i wanna read more from you!
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Old 07-11-02, 08:56 PM   #8
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Damnz!!!
Gurl this was off the hook,
hard ish ...
diggin it ...
liked all of it .. so no need to quote!
Keep doin ur thang,

~1~
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