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Grav 1st
Hibernation 2nd
Me(Chris Cassius) 3rd


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hot, no question

Thanks Upppinnnnnn

you must be from rapmusic.com ay well word beats def hot yup.

first cat: kinda has a voice like cypress hills dudes. flow is hot and his deliveyr is pretty dope. lyrics is fuckin insane yup.

hibernation: yup i heard his shit before, he def has a hot style. delivery is pretty dope and his lyrics dope too. flow is fuckin insane I like the way he was switchin it too. def a dope verse from hibernation.

3rd cat: lighter voice but words im feelin it. flow is pretty coo, pause here and there word but its deadly. im feelin the lyrics of course, delivery is pretty dope too.

overall im feelin this track ima download it.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...344#post3138344

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Beat is ok kind fo repetative ammatuerish.
I like the first guys style flow is really nice delivery is nice
The part where he went silent was gay but ti made sense i guess
Lyrics were overall good but some parts wer sacraficed for flow

second guy flow Voice is alot better flow isnt as nice as the first guy lyrics werent as nice either. simple like a pimple that was extremely wack lol his ending wasnt as nice as the last guy

third guy his voice is like hes almost out of breathlyrics were cool. Dont know why you didnt do the ending thing like everyone else would have made the track alot better

overall 7/10

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