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Notorious Verses 5 83.33%
Lil-Youngstah 1 16.67%
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Old 10-01-04, 09:18 PM   #1
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Notorious Verses vs Lil-Youngstah

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Old 10-01-04, 09:22 PM   #2
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Old 10-01-04, 09:35 PM   #3
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This foo wanna battle thinkin he gonna be da "Reigning Champ" of every battle he Ever fought-in//
Though His been Knocked-out 2 Times So ladies & Gents give round of Applause for-him...

So u Say u "Spit" like u had "Notorious's-Verses"//
Though your Brain can't Take all da Flow Cause u Got a Short Memory Expand with "Wireless-Circuits"...

Since he da "Champ" Might as Well give him his Night Gown & "Wack" Crown//
Though da True Champ Just Came-in "Knockin" u out On da 1st Openin Round...

Dat's my verse aight dawg
 
Old 10-01-04, 09:44 PM   #4
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Old 10-01-04, 10:01 PM   #5
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u aint spittin ya line dawg u gotta spit first......
 
Old 10-01-04, 10:05 PM   #6
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shit it don't matter just spit....................
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Old 10-02-04, 10:36 AM   #7
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Dawg If Dis Rap Shit Was Prison Itself I Would B A Rap Ex-Con
My Style Would Make Ur Ass Walk Faster Dan Pitchers Do To Barry Bonds
Im Da Sickest In Dis Biz, C'mon Nigga Don't U Hear My Flow
Ur Punches Are Soft Like Roy, But Mines Always Hit Like Ichiro
I Aint Meen To Kill Ur Self-Esteem, But Dawg I Had Ta
I May Have Lost B4, But Now Im "Mr. October" Like Derek Jeter
 
Old 10-02-04, 11:11 AM   #8
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Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

Dawg If Dis Rap Shit Was Prison Itself I Would B A Rap Ex-Con
My Style Would Make Ur Ass Walk Faster Dan Pitchers Do To Barry Bonds
^^^^^^^^^^^ Aight good opener mayne nice punch


Im Da Sickest In Dis Biz, C'mon Nigga Don't U Hear My Flow
Ur Punches Are Soft Like Roy, But Mines Always Hit Like Ichiro
^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight good punch nice wordplays


I Aint Meen To Kill Ur Self-Esteem, But Dawg I Had Ta
I May Have Lost B4, But Now Im "Mr. October" Like Derek Jeter
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ true mayne true good punch homie

notorious verses-u had good punches and good flow




This foo wanna battle thinkin he gonna be da "Reigning Champ" of every battle he Ever fought-in//
Though His been Knocked-out 2 Times So ladies & Gents give round of Applause for-him...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight good opener and good flow but wheres da punch mayne


So u Say u "Spit" like u had "Notorious's-Verses"//
Though your Brain can't Take all da Flow Cause u Got a Short Memory Expand with "Wireless-Circuits"...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight good punch dats good

Since he da "Champ" Might as Well give him his Night Gown & "Wack" Crown//
Though da True Champ Just Came-in "Knockin" u out On da 1st Openin Round...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ur opener was wack~! but good closa and flow nice punches


aight here we go

my vote goes to lil young he came harder wit dem punches

yo nortorious keep at it mayne u had good punches few more lines could to take care of young

but young came harder wit dem punches

v-young

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Old 10-02-04, 03:45 PM   #9
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

idk i think this was a close 1 both yall came weak in this n tha vocab wasnt so great. need sum work on tha flows 2. but notorious came out on top wit a lil better punches need ta work on tha rhymes tho

vote=notorious
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Old 10-02-04, 05:13 PM   #10
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

damn good battle good punches on both sides
but notorious won this cuz his punches stood out more the lil's did. And lil's structure was off so that made me kinda bored readin it. it was like a subway map
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Old 10-02-04, 05:53 PM   #11
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

lil- man ur structure was horrific and your punches were weak. try to shorten your lines and for gods sakes read the tutorials......2/10

notorious- man lmao @ u makin all your punches about baseball. but they were much better than the other guy so u definatly gota get my vote. try to elevate some more, pz......5/10

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Old 10-02-04, 05:59 PM   #12
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

okay my vote goes to---notorious
both we're pretty good but notorius just had a better word flow and vocb.! Plus he's punches made a lil more sense!
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Old 10-02-04, 06:29 PM   #13
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

it was an okey battle no one was flawless but one was better than the other and dat verses he had flow style punches and for some reason alot of thing about baseball lol.
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