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Old 11-23-04, 10:20 PM   #1
badgurl3136
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Poem Of Hope

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Its dark where I am
I can not see the light
There are shadows all around me
my heart is full of fright
Everyone is cheerful,
but they never gonna see
the storm clouds are forming
upon the peaceful sea
I cannot see the future
I cannot change the past
But the present is so heavy,
I don't think I'm gonna last

Kinda short but It works
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Old 11-30-04, 02:28 PM   #2
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short and sweet.i liked this piece.it showed great talent to be able to say so much with so little.keep em comin'
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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