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06-20-06, 10:25 PM
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It's Me!(Word nice track youll like)
IP: 9F8F FDD9
beat that i found on www.tightbeatz.com
theres some nice beats there http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4091575 ----------------------------------------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230276 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229668 Last edited by Speats : 06-21-06 at 07:39 AM. |
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06-21-06, 03:19 AM
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IP: 1399 38A4
1st verse: Im not really feelin that lyrics just wasnt there to me..the 50 cent line smh..i wasnt feelin that kid..the hook is a lil bit to clubby..like somethin Eminem would do..the verse was real bunched up too like i couldnt understand alot of the things you were sayin..overall the track isnt really my type but keep goin..
-Diabolic
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06-21-06, 06:00 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 5999 9F00
*listening*
whoa...i almost confused u for EM(voice)....hook is nice yeah,i was feeling it and y do we gatta drop feedbacks when u've already commented on ur track?..lol short and nice anyways...cool 
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06-21-06, 01:50 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: AFDC F490
Aighhhtt homie...
I like this beat,but its not my style... Feelin the hook i like it,suits the beat First verse....aight flows koo,could be upped a lil...falls off like in two points but its still nice,emotions koo..i think your accent is koo,it adds to your emotion a lot..its nice...deliverys nice..could be a lil stronger though...Presence is nice it dont feel like your hesitating or nervous....Koo verse lyrics are koo,lol you always make funny lyrics word up Hook.... Second verse....oh they aint one...damn Koo track but it should have been longer yo nice shit can you RTF here plz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230362
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06-21-06, 01:58 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: A68E 9D69
you dont sound too comfortable its like your tense tryin to get the words out, or it sounds like on this....the hook is kinds corney but catchy so its not bad, i dunno id say you need some work....the lyrics were pretty decent tho....eh i unno
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06-21-06, 03:33 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 9B77 9D76
Listenin..ahha intro is funny shit...hahaa yo shit is on the funny tip right...your energy is real hot and so is delivery...HAHAHAA AT WHITE FIDDY CENT...haha ure lyrics funny..flow is pretty tight...lol woah at bush line...hook is catchy..this is a funny ass joint....nice ass joint too...8/10
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