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04-29-07, 07:58 AM
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What' it do?
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Week 4: Brandon Cielasek 2-1 .vs. Lay Fear 2-1
IP: 477E 12AE
Sunday: Battles are setup Wednesday Night: Brandon 1 bar Thursday Night: Lay Fear 2 bars Friday Night: Brandon 1 bar Sunday Morning: Battles close Feeding is allowed, and will be optional
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04-29-07, 03:27 PM
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Lyrical
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IP: 248B F8E1
ok you lost little boy.
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04-30-07, 04:54 PM
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don't try.
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IP: 70C2 2176
That a question?..check checkkkkk
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04-30-07, 05:05 PM
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don't try.
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IP: 70C2 2176
No matter what this chump talks, I'm sure Brandon will find doubt
cuz 'paperback' a book?.. ...its what he can afford for replacement, after we rip his spine out
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05-01-07, 12:17 AM
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Lyrical
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IP: 248B F8E1
Weak wordplay won't get you anywhere, quit the charades
I say you're Cool with ladies cause damn you been Bitchen for days I'd ruin your rep, but there is just nothing to tarnish man So if anyone was to lay fear...they'd be fuckin a garbage can don't get the first one?....wow, good bye
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05-01-07, 02:18 PM
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don't try.
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IP: 9244 687A
haha..man thats original
You said ya last name is sounded Cie LAW sek?..k You can't escape the carnage..I'm a rebel n C' hates to be chokin.. You try to resist the analogy?..shit, 'LAW's' were made to be broken
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05-01-07, 06:48 PM
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IP: 477E 12AE
Brandon
Weak wordplay won't get you anywhere, quit the charades I say you're Cool with ladies cause damn you been Bitchen for days This was ok, Worded smoothly. overall concept was meh I'd ruin your rep, but there is just nothing to tarnish man So if anyone was to lay fear...they'd be fuckin a garbage can Meh, wording. Ok line Lay No matter what this chump talks, I'm sure Brandon will find doubt cuz 'paperback' a book?.. ...its what he can afford for replacement, after we rip his spine out Wasn't a bad concept, but extremely forced and badly worded You can't escape the carnage..I'm a rebel n C' hates to be chokin.. You try to resist the analogy?..shit, 'LAW's' were made to be broken This concept is played. Wording was good though Dude, i see so much potential in lay, its not funny. Straight up. really descent concepts and overall thoughts on your wording. Just put things in order better, and investigate whats really already played. Brandon you were straight overall. simple, but enough v.Brandon
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05-01-07, 10:55 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
No matter what this chump talks, I'm sure Brandon will find doubt
cuz 'paperback' a book?.. ...its what he can afford for replacement, after we rip his spine out ^^ kinda stretched.. wasnt feeling it You can't escape the carnage..I'm a rebel n C' hates to be chokin.. You try to resist the analogy?..shit, 'LAW's' were made to be broken ^^mehh.. good concept but the punch was too elementary vs. Weak wordplay won't get you anywhere, quit the charades I say you're Cool with ladies cause damn you been Bitchen for days ^^alright this was decent I'd ruin your rep, but there is just nothing to tarnish man So if anyone was to lay fear...they'd be fuckin a garbage can ^^a played concept worded good i expected more but you get what u get.. i gotta go with brandon here for a bit more originality. Vote: Brandon
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05-03-07, 11:05 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 060A 7F81
No matter what this chump talks, I'm sure Brandon will find doubt
cuz 'paperback' a book?.. ...its what he can afford for replacement, after we rip his spine out ehhhhhhh You can't escape the carnage..I'm a rebel n C' hates to be chokin.. You try to resist the analogy?..shit, 'LAW's' were made to be broken meh..... ok... vs Weak wordplay won't get you anywhere, quit the charades I say you're Cool with ladies cause damn you been Bitchen for days ok I'd ruin your rep, but there is just nothing to tarnish man So if anyone was to lay fear...they'd be fuckin a garbage can na v/Brando |
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05-06-07, 06:33 AM
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What' it do?
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IP: CF18 266B
Brandon Wins 3-1
Lay Fear Loses 2-2
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