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Old 05-13-07, 08:04 AM   #1
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Week 6: FlowIntelligent 3-2 .vs Lay Fear 3-2

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Sunday: Battles are setup
Wednesday Night: FlowIntelligent 1 bar
Thursday Night: Lay Fear 2 bars
Friday Night: FlowIntelligent 1 bar
Sunday Morning: Battles close

Feeding is allowed, and will be optional
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Old 05-14-07, 11:24 PM   #2
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Old 05-16-07, 10:20 PM   #3
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ah wat up flow, good luck to you too.
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Old 05-17-07, 12:11 AM   #4
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Go ahead, Shiver & quake, Im the type to break a nigga face
Your dawgs know ............... Even ya pet agree like Triple H
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Old 05-17-07, 02:48 PM   #5
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Triple H? I'll leave ya raw,give up wwe done bitchin..
cuz if u HHH, then even john seena win by submission
I'll give ya credit man..your not entirely whack, he stuck dyin
astounded ya punch was semi-descent..b4 beins truck by one

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Old 05-17-07, 11:31 PM   #6
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Wishing you wasnt on my hitlist .. Now learn you're far from best
Even your punchlines suck at flirting, Theyre playing hard to get
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Old 05-18-07, 08:45 AM   #7
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Wow. excellent wording in both bars by flow. I've never seen
the first concept. I thought it stood out, not really harsh.
but good.

Lay both of your bars had great wording as well, but just
wouldn't qualify as harsh punches to me. You need to add
a little bit more umph. into them.

Flow 2nd bar was good as well. fresh/good flip


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Old 05-18-07, 08:17 PM   #8
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good wording in flow's first bar.

Go ahead, Shiver & quake, Im the type to break a nigga face
Your dawgs know ............... Even ya pet agree like Triple H

..... however. you're only saying that his friends know you break a nigga face. then you refer to triple h.

lol. whack.

and your second bar was just played.
lay fear had the semi line with potential but it failed and the other one just sucked..

so by default flow wins.
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Old 05-19-07, 06:50 PM   #9
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Vote up. 2 battles still open.
I'm tryin to put up next week's battles
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Old 05-19-07, 08:27 PM   #10
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Go ahead, Shiver & quake, Im the type to break a nigga face
Your dawgs know ............... Even ya pet agree like Triple H
ehhhh


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Triple H? I'll leave ya raw,give up wwe done bitchin..
cuz if u HHH, then even john seena win by submission
um...ok
I'll give ya credit man..your not entirely whack, he stuck dyin
astounded ya punch was semi-descent..b4 beins truck by one
no


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Wishing you wasnt on my hitlist .. Now learn you're far from best
Even your punchlines suck at flirting, Theyre playing hard to get
cool



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Thought both of you had an ehhh bar and a ok bar. Lay your decent bar was ok at best. Flow your 2nd bar was the best bar of the battle imo.. So um yea you won.
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Old 05-19-07, 08:29 PM   #11
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Go ahead, Shiver & quake, Im the type to break a nigga face
Your dawgs know ............... Even ya pet agree like Triple H
meh, wording off
Wishing you wasnt on my hitlist .. Now learn you're far from best
Even your punchlines suck at flirting, Theyre playing hard to get
lol ok

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Triple H? I'll leave ya raw,give up wwe done bitchin..
cuz if u HHH, then even john seena win by submission
no
I'll give ya credit man..your not entirely whack, he stuck dyin
astounded ya punch was semi-descent..b4 beins truck by one
meh

V/Flow for coming that much better
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Old 05-20-07, 01:54 AM   #12
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vote- flow
both flows was good, and even better cuz that one seena line did play hard to get, but it was goin in the right direction
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Old 05-20-07, 09:35 AM   #13
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wIntelligent Wins 4-2
Lay Fear Loses 3-3
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