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09-12-06, 05:09 PM | #1 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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Submit Your Songs
IP: 0775 E664
Submit your songs below. Keep in mind you need 3 votes before your song will appear on the radio. We will inform you though Lets get 'em in.
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09-13-06, 11:48 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: BC9F EC21
www.soundclick.com/blayboy
"If U Want It" "Life Goes On" "336" if you want it- vocals can be turend up a little bit flow can be improved in parts dubs are off second verse sounds hella different flow is better in this verse but still off in a few parts overall flow wasnt smooth enough delivery was pretty cool though dubs were off hook comes in rough vote: no life goes on- need to up the talking in the intro i cant hear unless i strain to listen to it hook flow is off on one of the bars not too bad though dont like the effect on it though delivery needs to be uppes sound like youre running out of breath the line after why god took you now too many words in that line made it a little choppy a few others too flow was on in the begginning fell of or 2 bars in the beggining last bar is a llittle bit off not too noticable government sees it line flow is off stop this ish line is off a lil along with the record line overall flow was a little choppy in place dubs were off for the most part and the hook delivery was blah vote: no 336- flow was better no doubt like the hook not feeling this verse at all repeats on the ffirst part of this verse idk just weak if it was just the first verse and the hook i probably would have said yea cause flow was on throughout but second verse was jsut mad weak to me vote: no Last edited by Willa : 09-17-06 at 02:29 PM. |
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09-14-06, 06:46 PM | #3 | |||||
scotia's finest
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IP: EA03 FBCE
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4438924
if life were like that............get at me beat is weak to me idk hook is mad nice first verse was ok didnt like the bub line at all was a like story telling track and two of the lines were soft didnt really belong in there 2nd cat dubbs are off on almost your whole verse flow was pretty nice no doubt lyrically not as strong as the first verse vote:undecided ill get back to you Last edited by Willa : 09-17-06 at 02:33 PM. |
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09-14-06, 08:00 PM | #4 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: 8CF3 5E15
A drink and a beer
Thats Us HEAT...i dunno wtf else to call it.... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...fm?bandID=82331 that's us flow is pretty good this beat is harder to flow to than most dubbs sounded nice i love the third verse but vote: no heat lyrically its nice on your verse flow is on throughout dubs are good alot of nice lines lol delivery is cool a few dubbs are off but not many tony like the flow alot of multis got a nice swagger like your delivery enygma alot of multis like the flow lyrically not as nice as you usually coem but pretty nice vote: yes shot and a beer dont really like the flow on mi's first verse lyrically its pretty nice though love his delivery though bea t is grimey feats the beat great cho nice delivery flow feats the beat well mi like this verse alot better no doubt love it all cho nice verse too but i cant stand the talking at the end lol vote: no beacause of the talking at the end
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09-17-06, 11:36 AM | #5 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 1A30 2FF3
The intro for my new mixtape. straight bars, no hook. hottest shit i got right now.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4281453 vote please. Yeah, i heard this. im feeling this track. My Vote. YES voice wise you kinda sound like a young jada flow is cool predictable rhyme scheme but it was on point lyrically you were pretty nice alot of ncie lines but there were some taht were blah to me vote: no Last edited by Willa : 09-17-06 at 02:47 PM. |
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09-17-06, 12:07 PM | #6 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 1F90 E8B3
check it
www.myspace.com/thatkidvibez track : Young Vibez - Real Estate Diss (opening song) Vote yes for real estate & yes for the conflict & young vibe joint intro is dumb lol at the pops in your accapella when you jsut talking flow is on point but weak alot of lines that you used the same word ot make it rhyme llike the second beat better flow is off on 2 lines third verse i dont like at all delivery doesnt appeal to em flow is more choppy vote: no Last edited by Willa : 09-17-06 at 02:52 PM. |
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09-17-06, 02:56 PM | #7 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
hmm well i think this song shoule be on here its jsut dope everyone can relate
http://www.myspace.com/illgrammatix2 budgit baller jay and ii both vpte yes for budget baller so someone else needs to check it out
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09-18-06, 12:05 AM | #8 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 7994 4630
vote yes for budget baller.....
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09-18-06, 03:20 AM | #9 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: FC94 E1E4
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4452688
My new track I wrote for my girl. Called "I Promise" just peep it with an open mind. ok talking needs to eb upped cant really hear what your saying beat and you are both way too loud now the bass in the ebat drowns out your lyrics somewhats first verse sounds like you cam closer to the mic in the mid verse vote no because volume is messed up and it makes it hard to listen to Vote: NO
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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here.. Last edited by Willa : 09-18-06 at 05:54 PM. |
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09-18-06, 12:38 PM | #10 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
oh yes
i also nominate my track my blood sweat tears and apexx's tracks black sunglasses and anybody out there ill post up the links later I vote Black Sunglasses YES. I havent checked the other Joints -Kon
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09-18-06, 01:51 PM | #11 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 041A E2A8
www.soundclick.com/chosenonesent
Da Struggle flow is mad basic in the beggining lyrically a few wack lines in the beggining 2nd guy is alot better but theres an odd pause in the middle of the track 3rd guy voice is kind of aannoying flow gets a little choppy towards the en of your verse 4th verse probably the best verse vote: no
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09-18-06, 04:25 PM | #12 | |||||||
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 63C3 C75D
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09-18-06, 04:29 PM | #13 | |||||||
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 63C3 C75D
I can't edit my votes in......gimme sum power Kon....
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09-18-06, 05:50 PM | #14 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
theres already 3 mods in the sub so you cant so just make a seperate post
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09-18-06, 06:03 PM | #15 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 0775 E664
what she said......i say yes for Black Sunglasses. Imma check some more out in a few
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