10 Lines Minimum...
I'll Spit In 15 Minutes...

Ack...Ran Outta Ideas...Oh Well Hes My Verse...
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Step Up To Me...I Really Dont Think You Want It/
Ill Make You Look Like That Wigga From "Malibus Most Wanted"// ~1~
I'll Leave Ya Thoughts Haunted...Watch My Verse Explode/
Watch Your Shit Be Phonier Than Soap Opera Episodes// ~2~
You Aint A Gangsta Your Just A Queer Actor/
Battling Me...You Laying Ur Ass On The Line Like Fear Factor// ~3~
This Cats Sick? Probably Cuz He Got Sars/
Only Time He Rocks The +Mike+ Is When He's Drunk At A Gay Bar// ~4~
Cuz All You Is A Bitch...Like The Fourth Member Of Hanson/
Cuz Your Shits Almost As Soft As Fags At The Playboy Mansion// ~5~
And If This Bitch Says I Suck...Then Hes A Fucking Hypocrite/
And We Know You Choke On Fags And I Dont Mean Cigarettes// ~6~
Its So Funny...The Level Of Wackness Youve Reached/
Only Time Your A Challange Is When Your Competing Against A Leech// ~7~
So Your Rap Shit Wont Pass...Just Get Dumped In The Trash Can/
But With My Cold Punchlines Youll Probably Think Im Alaskan// ~8~
I Might As Well Be...Cuz When I Spit A Verse...You Freeze/
You Wanna Be Black...But The Only Thing Black On You Is Your Knees// ~9~
You Chose To Battle Me...Now We All Watch You Fall/
This Kid Should B A Clown In The Circus He Loves To Juggle Balls// ~10~
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Your Turn...

listen up, when i come to ya block, im holdin big
gats son, but u come to da shootout wit plastic
cap guns, i hope this nigga has fun, cause i came
here to blast one, if you wanna get clapped son,
go ahead and act dumb, cause im talin on any
nigga who trippen, you need to step it up, cause
you bout to get your first whippen, you know da
glock wont stop till da clock stop ticken, im
passin these slugz out like free samples of chicken
and if yo girl poke her lips out, then she ready for
licken, yeah im sicken but my shit aint contageous,
but it'll be outrageous how i lay you on da
pavemant, if i dont get my payment, you gonna
be in enslavement, im gettin tired of waitin, i got
this nigga on his knees, now start prayin, what
you think i studdard, nigga you know what im sayin,
nigga you think im playin, best step down, cause you
dont want me to start layin, so im outro cause this
nigga will start cryin if i talk more shit about you.

Humm gun talk verse gay talk questionable battle but

Open: To Face this is tough because both are wack but To face was not so corny.

Punches: Carlos I mean his gay punches where mediocore at best but I just can't see punches in trigga talk

Metaphors: To face I mean Carlos I hate gay metaphors no one wants to picture that shit

Structure: To Face Come on Carlos that shit was across the screen man

Flow: To Face easy to follow flows off the screen with a breeze

Vote: To Face

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cant you'all niggas vote!!!!!
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ok basic break
punches:carlos
structure:carlos
flow:both
diss:both
entertainment:carlos, to-face no hate but ya shit wuz borin
multies:carlos
vote:carlos

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