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Old 07-27-06, 08:35 PM   #1
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Old 07-27-06, 08:37 PM   #2
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Old 07-27-06, 08:47 PM   #3
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Old 07-27-06, 09:10 PM   #4
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Old 07-28-06, 03:09 AM   #5
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Old 07-28-06, 07:15 AM   #6
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*listening*

whoa PT ur mic was mad loud...but w/e...yeah u had a nice flow on this..lyrics were alright!...yeah decent job



luciano...well yeah u came with some sick lyrics...i feel ur flow wud have been a lot more better...cos i know u can flow pretty well..here it seemed like u were rushing some words and it kinna turned ur flows off at some spots..

hook is alright too..its the only part of the track i actually feel more


beat well,i didnt feel it at all....only when the hooks were up tho




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Old 07-28-06, 05:01 PM   #7
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werd upppin this shit

where the fck is the feed @
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Old 07-29-06, 02:31 PM   #8
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Past Tense...consider using a de-esser at some point in your editing process

cut down some on the SSssssss...It's not bad...But, it's noticeable in my headphones


Luciano...u came in way too loud bruh...

ur flow is ambitious, but lacks polish...U need to control ur breathing and ur delivery...I loved the rhyming and energy tho

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Past Tense...very comfortable on the mic with the flow...solid verse

Hook is slick

nice soundin track bro...just needs a touch better mixing of the vocals (mainly Luciano)


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4sho bro...aslong as im elevateing

all i can ask 4
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u were to return the favor...i guess!
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this shit hot

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Beat: It's straight. Can't hate much, 'cuz I know how most soundclick beats are.

1st Verse (Past Tense): Vocals were mixed well, not as loud as other people have been saying. Flow was straight, didn't really fall off majorly anywhere. Delivery was alright too, but that seemed to be pretty much all you had going for you. As far as your lyrics go, nothing really stood out to me, kept it pretty simple. But hey, at least you're not trying to sound like Young Jeezy anymore, right?

2nd Verse (Luciano): First off, your vocals are mixed a little loud...home setup? Well, others have already noticed it, so I'll leave it at that. Delivery is alright, could use some more bass in your voice. Though I did like how you rolled the "r" on "rap star" in your first bar. Lyrics were ok, "Stay with 2 Clipse, I'm so Phareal like I'm a Trackstar" was highlight of your verse. However, that line as well as others had concepts I've heard a few times before (i.e. the "Franchise" line).

Overall, this was decent. Not appealing to my tastes a whole lot, but I see the effort you guys put into it. And afterall, you guys seem satisfied with it...

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