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Old 03-02-04, 05:42 PM   #1
Skeptik_07
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Well I'll Be Damned

IP: 0BB1 EEDA

i lost the right to flow
Well I'll be damned
people say i just dont know
Well I'll be damned
Im on the street with no where to go
Well I'll be damned

My heart starts rushing
Well I'll be damned
My blood starts gushing
Well I'll be damned
My thoughts and feelings start flushing
Well I'll be damned

I pick up the pace
Well I'll be damned
i start to run the race
Well I'll be damned
I guess im just running in place
Well I'll be damned

Don't know the difference between you and me
Well I'll be damned
I dont even know who I be
Well I'll be damned
I guess the lord really hates me
Well I'll be damned
my life really sucked
i guess im fucked
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Old 04-07-04, 03:22 PM   #2
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It was ok, but it did make me laugh though. The title is catchy, which is good. The "well i'll be damned" reminds me of my grandma, but overall it was ok.
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