yo this is a rough draft of a song im in the process of making, its the whole song but i got to re record it i was just focusing on the chorus becuase ig ot several choruses written for this and this is the one i chose and want to know what you guys think of the song before i re reocrd it, and my Cousin POnders aka DJ Raymo is on the beat one of his first beats on his new Motif, word

aight yo leave some real feed back
the song is called IF I HAD
http://www.soundclick.com/djemsce


i left feed back on these songs

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209838
nice lil track with my boy implicit singing on it
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209853
ausstrialian guy, word aussie hip hop

damn yo i left feed on songs why aint no one returing the fuckng favor

listening:
beat is dope but aint really my style, the chorus is so-so , i love this track seriously, you got a good flow, vocals are low sometimes, but pretty good quality, love the way you traught your lyrics on the beat, just work on your chorus

.::.Speats.::.

nice beat...smooth...

ur flow is good...presence cud be larger on the beat though


delivery could be better


nice lyrics though...real mostly


not a bad track dawg


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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

word its just the rough draft i know the things that are wrong and could be better just wanted to know what you think, and thanks for the feedback tho, and what could b e changed with the chorus?

uppin for poeple to hear speats beat.. and shit