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Old 06-17-05, 05:13 PM   #1
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Jack The Ripper
Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons
good open
Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you
Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!"
udderly raw
Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip
Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship
wordplay was good
Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit
But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit
ite, decent
Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter
I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order
smash that analogy
You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope!
When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope
mmmm no
Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire
I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire
decent
Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook
Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook'
best line
Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench
Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth
fire
9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing
So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king
decent close

*aight, your verse was hot, had its own
style. you were talking at him more than
you were hating. verse was good, some
lines were fire, some were just ish. but
in the end the verse was good. real hot.

9th Degree

Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
hot, just a lil bit
He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts
And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws
real hot bar
What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree
Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy
haha, fire
I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked
But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket
slurred, but good
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
wordplay was good
You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection
So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question
haha, loved this bar
Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later"
I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader
good connect, good personal
Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter
I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper
decent
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook
wasnt feelin it
This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock
I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box
good close

*i loved this verse, the personals
were hot, the punches were fire.
you had some many genres of lines.
this verse was one of the best in the
tourney. good read, gets my vote.


vote: 9th Degree

good reads yall & good luck to both.
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