iight here the rules

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10 lines minimum
No d/r votes
No hate votes

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you spit your verse first

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yo dawg check it



notorious we already got one rapper from booklyn named that
but you're wack...... the only similarity you'll have is that yall both getting killed
serious, im sick but not contagious..... to bad for you
how the FUCK!, you claiming west, but say you from brooklyn.... bitch you aint skilled
damn you're stupid.... cant even use the tools right
............. but he fools right, but when i kick his ass it feels right
i use your blood as paint when i tag.... to warn of any fag
you gag when you see my name..... you iant got the right to brag
ill drag your corpse around "brooklyn"
...................... if thats really where you from
and show off my win...... to show your city youur pitifulness,
your existence is lame, you couldnt blow up in fame
..... well unless i threw you a hand grenade, dam you're a shame

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stay true, cuzez

iight


i guess your talkin shit, damn yo breath is stinkin...
ill leave you headless, middle of the street leakin...
damn your verse, is sloppy and fake...
your shit aint writin, its copy and paste...
my verse is hot, 360 degrees...
i am clever, nobody as clever as me...
look at yo name, your mom shouldn't have named you...
you couldnt be at my level, if we was in the same room...
so when i win, ill be rubbin it in...
the only thing you win, WACKEST MC OF THE YEAR...
i write my rhymes with explination marks, now listen to what you hear...
your just a wacky man, from pakistan...
no way you could win this battle, maybe if your name was jakie chan...
you are impossible, like fat kids and back flips...
after all this, ILL BE BIGGER THAN JAY-Z's LIPS...
your talkin to girls, in a gay affection...
your so poor, can't afford to pay attention....


badda bing playa


uppin the votes

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votes please
upping................ 50 characters

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Aight check it

Mcnotoruius...First line played like whoa, alright struc and flow but to simplistic gotta come harder from now on personals kinda lackin and punches sucked..4/10

S-Killz, tight verse alright personals lines stretched so it was hard to flow but i do the same thing, some good wordplay dissen big and shit overall you came harder than mc notourious 7/10

Vote Skillz

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yo s-killz that was tight you owned the whole way through dog...all i've got ta say to noto is get original...i've had enough with all i'm going to kill and all shit...come on people that's weak shit.

skillz dominated in every category, the only thing was it didn't flow with perfection...it was alright but not great in that category...ya dig

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thanks for the votes
accom. your battle is already fnished, lol

but upping, more votes please

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uppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggggg.. ..........

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yo ima go with the notorious one
he didnt do it in a BIG way but to me it was efficient
fav line:
"look at yo name, your mom shouldn't have named you...
you couldnt be at my level, if we was in the same room..."

both had a koo flow althogh it was a lil simplistic
skillz verse was structured better and rhymed smooth but lacked gud content
needed more vocab, multies, imagery and harder punches
i say skillz probley has the nicer flow, but skillz does't get my vote

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bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271

wtf?^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
bullshit vote
but wateva
upping more votes please

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ok breakdown
opener - skillz..even thos it didnt rhyme...it was a harder hgitting punch...
flow - mc...felt ur flow more...skilz werk on ya flow and not stretchin ya lines..
punches - skillz...fasho his hit harder...mc u need to elevate in this category...
personals - skillz...u used sum hot personals....mc this category will help your punches...elevate here too...
wordplay - skillz...nice job in this category...
closer - skillz cuz his ish wasnt played....he also had a nice multi in it...
vote - skillz
mc elevate dogg...dont stick wit the elementary lines....ull get betta...no hate jus a vote
return the favor in my battle wit carson...HONEST VOTES ONLY....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119160

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

im going for mc yep fuck the other foo. and mc was having a little flow anyways my vote is mc

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this is turnin into a real battle

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