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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-21-06 at 07:23 PM

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Anthony has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-06 07:24 PM.

Rah-Ta-Tat-Tat has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-06 07:24 PM.

yo im going to sleep with you
also ima eat with you
creep in the bed with you
mightr even give head to you
cuz ima beast who likes publix pharmacys
like killing pills hotter then barney\s
five four three two one
i have a smal gun
thats why u have to run
like a lion or a tiger

Dis Lil Fuck ha ha...Letz Heat It Up Real Quick..

I Bring Da Toaster, It Popz...And Brainz~Spill, Buh Still U Remain-Chilled?
U Bout 2 Endulge In Dopenezz Without Havin Yo' Nose Cocaine-Filled
In Simple Termz, Da World Turns So Watch Or U Might Fall-Over
I'll Have Datazz Marchin To My Rythm Like He'z Playin Toy Soldier
My Problem Solver aka Revolver Makez U Do More Than Brush Yo Shoulder
Ur So Dumb U'll Prolly Spit 'Hot' Rhymez & Theyll Scold~Yuh*
ITS OVER, Down 2 Da Last-Bar, How Iz U Doin So Far?????

*Lookz At You*

I See U Aint Gettin' Nowhere Like A Tireless Car!!!!

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Hey Yo Yuh Verse Wuz Wack U Didnt Even Diss Me????

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Voted For: Rah-Ta-Tat-Tat

Close, but ima have to give it to Raht...............

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Plz Explain Betta Or It Might Get Removed!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: Rah-Ta-Tat-Tat

lol diz was actual an 1-sided battle... I liked it... anthony didn't bring ne heat in ya verse... but rah's whole verse had personals thru-out... too heavy handed direct punches... made me nod my head while reading; & actual brough a smile 2 my face... good shit... Now as for Anthony's verse... tha opening line doesn't rhyme... sleep wit u, & eat wit u i guess it rhymes no matter how I say em... *shruggs* so I'm really not feeling dat ant... & I know anthony's structure is a lil different from others... but his bars were really off in this 1... syllable 4 syllable tha shit's just off... But there were a few witty 1 liners in there dat made me chuckle & question ya sexuality

Punches: Rah (he just had more)
Personals: RAh
Creativity: RAh
Complexity: Rah
Structure: Rah
Enjoyment: Rah

Vote: Rah ... anthony u didn't have one personal & ya verse couldn't been directed at any1...

rtf in my battle: http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...ad.php?t=224402

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Voted For: Rah-Ta-Tat-Tat

this battle was real weak. wtf did you drop anthony, that shit was extremely wack!! sorry but you both need to improve a lot. both need to study other emcees battles and maybe get help, but only rat ta tat tat has potential, anthony you should just quit, rat took this shit by far!

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Voted For: Rah-Ta-Tat-Tat

This wasn't even a battle. Whackest person i've ever seen rap. Obviously Rah-Ta won on everything. Im not gonna hurt my fingers typin a reason why he won cuz Anthony didn't even do shit...Vote to Rah.