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Old 04-04-08, 07:11 AM   #1
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Old 04-12-08, 03:10 AM   #3
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im killing myself at war with the insides
dual persona got me scitzo in this tide
makin the first mark grippin my razor
cuttin my self gettin deeper n deeper
fatigue eyes relaps and body drops
my mental keeps the fight physical stops
gets the first hit a mind still ignant
theres no wrong or right just blatent
hits bone bruise its deeper than thought
lost ideas of armor will me to stop
clash scratch the swords of verbals
scroned from the perspective murals
painted by soul to place backround
inner stomach waist in bile ground
found burnt beast d'evils of men
my past combat again re again
times are dark but will is good
defeating yourself first step to MChood
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Old 04-14-08, 12:05 PM   #4
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Deep in abyss a titan roams, grieving he's pissed
Steep in the pits of hell, well needs of assist
This creature of bliss worn by the features it fits
Surrounded by shallow thoughts, im so eagar but dense
Breathing is tensed concaved to this massive occassion
First wave in already wiped out half the invasion
Bodies lay bent, this satan laughs the wraith he's awakin
Strap'd with my favorite blade yourn to match the abrasion
Rations impatience, demonic beings springs from the fixture
Bleeding a mixture of pain, sweat, deem the dementors
Leap for the clincher, violatile drinks from the lincher
Wounds obtained, hell to pay for the deeds of a stitcher
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Old 05-02-08, 07:46 AM   #5
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Waiting on the next pic to write to...i might actually take the next one serious
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